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Shane was huddled up
with Vince. It was 4AM. They sat in an all night diner reviewing the
previous night’s activities. “It would
appear that our Ms. Peabody performed according to her reputation. Arrogant, superior, self-aggrandizing she did
it all including trying to corner our Samantha.” Vince updates Shane.
“I knew she would. I
should have bet you on that.” Shane jokes with Vince.
Vince winks at Shane having mastered the art of drawing in
saps was not about to be one himself.
“Well our decoy worked. We
performed the bump and run perfectly. It
had the desired effect of breaking them up with Samantha being no worse for
wear.
deliberate. But I think that
scent, like the ***** in heat she is. So
we’re keeping an eye on Samantha.”
Shane just shakes her head, glad that Vince is on her
side. “Great Vince. I have meeting with
“Hey Shane” Vince calls out.
“I’m going into that house tomorrow.
I’ll let you know what I find.”
Shane just waves her understanding and exits the diner.
Chapter 134 – Nibbling at the Bait
takes the lift down to the lobby of the five star hotel she stayed in last
evening. Walking up to the front desk
she interrupts the clerk as she was dealing with another client. “Excuse me I am to check out today but will
be extending my stay. Will you take care
of that for me?”
asks but really is demanding.
“Of course what room please?” The clerk quickly asks.
quickly spouts off her room number, turning in the proceeds out of the
hotel.
***
walks into the Planet fired up. Someone
had scratched her Mini. She noticed it
in the parking lot of her apartment this morning. It was unusual for her to walk around the
back of her car before she got in but this morning she noticed some debris
behind her car and went to move it before she got in.
bent down to pick up the leafy material and happened to look up in the process
and that’s when she saw it. There on the
back panel of her car was a scratch that ran from the left beneath the tail
light three quarters of the way across to the right.
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Great update. Looking forward to more!
Helena is definitely getting to creepy, just love the story, always looking for more. Looking forward to your next post.
Uh oh….how much, if anything did she hear? J, this is still such a strong story…way to go! Thanks!
Sorry about the last comment, I think I was on something yesterday coz everything I wrote had a touch of the neurotic in it, lol. Looks like Helena saw something she liked in San Francisco, but at least the plan is coming together. You gotta love Shane and Alice, that line where Shane says Bette doesn’t even cry about her car anymore was classic Shane and Alice banter. I can imagine Bette weeping over her precious Saab, lol. 143chpts you’ve written? Well then I saw BRING IT ON! =P
What did she hear!!!!? This is fantastic! More, Please and Soon!
I am rubbing my hands together, that bitch is gonna fall so goddamn hard, I just wish I was there to see it, least I’ll read about it!Mate, I do have one request – I like your idea of the perches – but I been thinking SHSL is going to might lonely up there on the pedestal – I think we ought to let SST (Super Sweet T) up there too, what do you reckon? We’ll still get a darn good view, but at least SHSL will be smiling coz she got her SST with her, they are so good together I just couldn’t bring myself to make her go up there alone!! Go on mate, make that order!
Hmm, I left a comment, but it disappeared. Oh well. So, how much did Helena hear? Doh! Great job as always.
wow, i hope helena didn’t hear anything damaging, keep reeling her in for a kill, great update
Noooooo Please make her not have heard too much,
Just playing catchup with your last 2 chapters i get so excited with story…ok how sad am i?…lol anyway things are moving nicely towards Helenas demise… im almost feeling sorry for her..i said almost! oh by the way i like the idea of a trip to N.Y.and a little romance could be just what the doc ordered!!!
well all the traps have been put on the way to catch the bigest rat i ever read about it..lol..i cant wait to see Helenas fall..brilliant Jwet as always thanks :o)
Oh no! Helena took the bait but showed up too soon. How much did she hear? This story keeps getting better. PLEASE POST MORE OFTEN.
I hope she didn’t hear any of it. Great post, please post again soon
Great update, I love where you are going with this story. Definately some romance in order for B&T in NYC!! Can’t wait to see how it all pans out with Helena. ;)
how much was heard? my question exactly. thanks for the update!
damn..I hate that woman. I hope she didnt’ hear anything that was said. J—-keep it coming–and I can’t wait for Sunday. albeez…you sick in bed? foof head, shouldn’t be tinking so much
Well, I guess we all have the same question: how much did Helena hear? Her appearance in the Pediatrics Foundation office reminds me of when she was chasing after Tina…hmmm, this woman is soooo predictable…and that’s what’s gonna make her fall!!! Thanks for the chapter, J.
Great chapter… But I can’t wait to see what is in the house Vance found….Post soon..PLEASE
Jwet, glad I can bring a little levity into you day. I wonder if Grace was thinking about Helena’s obsession with Anna. Can’t wait to see how much if any Helena heard of the conversation between Grace and Samantha.
i’m sadden to think the end is near but you’ve been wreitting for a long time so i quess a break would be in order the age thing i just had a feeling i’m just 4 yrs older will wait for the next chapter my friend
j – you know i love ya babe. but im so sick i can barely keep my head up. im happy with the pair of you on sunday. SO not fair. fergz baby, im foof. tink me, k?
Oh fuck Helena there and hope she not here the conversation of Gracea and Samantha. Post soon please, thanks!
uh-oh, just what did the witch here??? you are so awesome, page by page the tension builds.
You’re doing a terrific job with this. I’m continually impressed by the way you weave all the pieces together. And yes, I want to know what the big H heard too.
Ok, who hit Alice’s mini…..was it one of Helena’s hench men? What did she tell her lawyer “that it’s in their best interest to retract the story”. Gee, that scares me. What, me, paranoid? I was wondering what was meant by the ‘bump and run’….was that the bathroom scene? I have the same question as everyone; what and how much did the evil one heard? Too bad you’re not coming to Hawaii, but yeah, it’s a heck of a long trip; and a birthday! Good Happy Birthday wishes to you! Thanks for sharing your story.
ahhhh! cliff hangers suck! I hope that helena didn’t hear any of that convo. I’m really glad that grace had a good time and raised a bunch of $$ too. *take the bait helena, take the bait* keep writing. I’ll be reading.
helena is creepy!!!!!!!!!!!
ok, I think I’m back to my senses lol J,I want you to smash H to pieces, esp if she ordered someone to scratch Alice’s car *grrrrr* Thanks as always.
She probably didn’t hear anything, being to busy listening to her self-absorbed, mind numbing, psychotic inner child. Let’s get her a Chucky doll for the holidays.