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Drowning – 23
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Previously After dropping Tina off, Dana drove aimlessly. She wasn’t sure how long she had driven, but she knew it had to be a while because the gaslight blinked on. She had been trying to clear her head. She was so torn. She wanted her friends to be right. She wanted to be able to talk to Alice and together they would work this out. But if she did that, she could hurt Alice. Even though Alice always said she would do anything for Dana, Dana didn’t really think that included putting herself in harm’s way. The only way to know for sure what Alice would want to do was to ask her and that put her at risk. She couldn’t get out of the circle of logic, which left her where she was when she started the drive, knowing that she couldn’t go to Alice.
She parked in front of Shane’s place and slowly walked up the stairs to the front door. She put her key in the door and didn’t even notice that the door was unlocked. She walked into the house and headed towards the couch. As she went to sit down she realized someone was already sleeping on the couch. She got closer and a tear ran down her face as she looked down at Alice, curled up on the couch asleep.
Chapter 23
Dana stood there at the side of the couch for quite sometime. If someone asked her, she wouldn’t be able to tell him if it was a minute or an hour. All she knew was that she was lost in memories. Somewhere between the mix of wine, emotion and fear, she found a peace for the first time tonight gazing at Alice’s sleeping form.
Dana studied Alice’s features as though there would be a test later. Her eyes first went to Alice’s eyes. She looked at the soft lines that have begun to form around her eyes. They weren’t the deep-set lines that proved age, they were soft, subtle lines that gave her face more depth and character. Alice didn’t quite agree with that observation but to Dana, she saw those lines, and realized why they were called laugh lines. Even in sleep, Dana saw Alice’s smile when she saw those lines and that smile made Dana’s heart full.
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I have finally caught up with your story, i’ve been reading for weeks., and what a chapter i eventually get to comment on. I am nearly speechless. WOW, WOW, WOW! <-I said nearly.
That was really really excellent – you know I love this story but that was definitely your best chapter. I particularly enjoyed the interaction with Alice and Bette/Robin. So like a drunk Alice would be!!!!!! Really looking forward to the next chapter – what is in the letter???………oh yeah and the sex scene was kinda hawt!!!
wow. that was great. i actually got a bit teary-eyed. i love danish and thank you for dana finally showing alice the letter. can’t wait for the next update. great job!
Noooooooooooooooooo what a way to leave it,grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, i hate cliffhangers, dont leave us hanging for too long, this chapter was wonderful, i hope Alice stays and does’nt go to W.D.C. You have got my head spinning..lol.
Thank you.
oi,dont leave us hanging here!!!! What an amazing chapter…wow
God you are good at dragging this out, and yet its always enough to pull us in for more. Of course, i cant wait for the next chapter so get a move on it. :) *****
lol “you work for IC”, O_o really? haha ok better post soon, I only forgive you ’cause the sex scene and all the argument was great!
Oooh… what’s in the letter? What’s in it that causes so much drama? Where’s the next chapter?
CCCCCUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMM OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN! update soon i’m sooooooooooo p’od that we didn’t get to see it yet! Ah! But that was fuckin’ awesome chapter! Update as soooon as you possibly can, Love it as always!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, You’re going to make us wait a week aren’t you. You can’t do this to me. I’m running out of food, my friends think I’ve left the country. All I can do is wait and check my computer. LOL Looking forward to your next chapter.
You just wouldn’t tell, I’m on the verge of pulling my hair out lol. That was wonderful, the sex was hot and emotional at the same time. Please, please update soon before I really go crazy.
betru2u checking in. OMG this chapter was incredible. I think you managed to trigger every single emotion I have. Yet, you still had to keep us waiting just a little longer for the big secret to be revealed LOL! Admit it, you work for IC. ;) I’ll be waiting patiently for the next round. Btw, the sex was hot!
CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP!
That’s all I was thinking when I read how you ended this. Luce, you’re driving me crazy here! I hope you’re happy that I was crying for most of this one too – even during the HOT sex scene! I complain, but you know I love the tease. (hey, my “skip-a-chapter” plan worked!)
Ok, I have spent the majority of the day and night reading all of the chapters to this story. This is an outstanding story! I love it, love it, love it! Your writing ability to tell a story is fantastic. You are awesome at describing scenes, you use direct quotes perfectly and grammatical it’s wonderful. Keep up the unbelievable great work! I cannot wait to read the next chapter and the next and the next, etc… I love it!
Finally something happened! I hate (and LOVE) your cliffhangers :D Danish can solve the stalker problem together! Hopefully you are not going to make us too long *fingers crossed*. *5*
Loved the pace of this chapter. And the cliffhanger is so perfect that this time I don’t mind it all, provided you post again soon, that is!
just found your fic here and good job! just when i thought i could know the real reason, u left it there…please update ASAP.. :)
Were are you. I’m a little worried haven’t seen anything from you anywhere, here or the media boards. I hope your OK. I know you’re from the US I just hope not the Gulf coast.