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Double Vision 16
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Previously…
“mmm… I’m glad I came”
“Me too” the reply was accompanied by a smile “I bet you are as good as they say”
A short harsh laugh burst forth “And who might that be? I hardly think we’ve moved in the same circles”
“You’d be surprised. I’ve been to see a few therapists in my time. And you’re quite the legend among them”
“Oh” came the sombre response. She suddenly perked up as they heard the buzz of a phone ringing “Fuck! What if that’s Tina?!”
“Hmm”
“Dammit! I missed it”
“You seem very concerned about Tina finding out”
Holding the now-mute phone in her hand, she looked at her companion.
“Why are you here? Why aren’t you there?”
“Would you rather I left?”
“I’d rather you answered me”
Silence
“Estelle”
Chapter 16
“Jenny?”
Estelle groaned and buried her face in her hands as Alice continued her tirade, which thus far consisted of the single word ‘Jenny’. She wondered, for the millionth time in the last 15 minutes just why on earth she had thought telling Alice about her dilemma was a good idea.
“Jenny? You slept with JENNY?!” to say Alice’s eyes were boggling out of their sockets would be an understatement. In fact, ‘boggling’ does not exist in the dictionary (not in my cheap-ass one anyway) but hopefully it conveys to you how wide-eyed with shock Alice was.
“I didn’t sleep with her!”
“What, then? You fucked her?”
“No!” scowled Estelle. “I didn’t… I… I couldn’t”
“But you went there with the intent of fucking her brains out?” asked Alice accusingly
“No comment”
“Estelle!! Why the hell would you do something like that?! How could you possibly think fucking Jenny would be a good idea when you spend day and night wanting to get together with Tina!”
“Alice, clearly it wasn’t a good idea, seeing how it has lead you to shriek in my ear”
“I’m not shrieking! I don’t shriek”
“Yes, you do”
“I do not shriek. I just talk very clearly and… passionately” huffed Alice, momentarily losing track of what caused the said shrieking.
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Hiho, Master V did it again… nice chapter… but now I have to rewrite one of my own scenes, written about three hours ago *grmpf* Even if I like great minds thinking alike, I won’t be accused of stealing… lol… And thanks, babe, for mentioning me in the notes. Liked the warp-speed comment btw… But as I said in a post on the board – a lot of ideas have to come out of my head… pronto… so I’ll honor that… And take your time reading my story, it’s not going away (I hope)… PPS
yey! first comment! Thanks Kijuma! Aw you had to re-write? great minds, yup indeedy! I *thought* you might like the warp-speed remark! Heheheh. Thanks, babe!
Great job with this considering that you’d run out of ideas a few days ago! This is really starting to get exciting! Not that it wasn’t before- I meant more exciting! I can’t wait to see where you take us next with Tina and Estelle- if they’re going anywhere at all! Loved the humour at the start too! Thanks- and your quick posting didn’t go unnoticed. x.
amazingly funny as always. now the last time i commented n put PPS at the end of it u posted within 2 days am i pushing my luck to ask you to PPS again??
V – gotta tell ya, i love the E/H combo, you write them so distinctly and so well…and A, well, A is just A…yeah, been here since the beginning and i don’t want to see and end…so keep it coming…okay…looking forward to the next post…..i know begging is somewhat rude, but please post soon…cheers!
Glad to see you back so soon, Missy!! “…Estelle remained cautiously quiet lest Alice regain her trail of thought” hehehe….whew Indeed, I am interested in this Estina…Titelle…ah…ummm…combo And do I see a little triangle forming with Al, T, and Estelle? Hmmm….PPS
Hysterica as usually…Jenny huh? hmmm…and ya know what? I think the chapter is JUST fine Yeppa no need to do a different chapter….NOPO!!
Am I feeling a Estellacios vibe coming? Great Chappie V. Lot of ideas and potential hook ups.
Yes! Estelle/Alice (so not a fan of Tina, sorry) to go along with Bette/Helena. That would be oh so perfect!
Is it love that’s in the air? every time they look around? can you bottle some up and send it over here? I love the Estelle tugging on Alice hair bit. Makes me want to go out and tug on someone’s hair. Onward to more crazy!
Good chapter. They are funny!!!!!!
You’re comment in the author’s notes makes me *Blush* quote ‘Gosh, your disappointment about the last chapter is palpable, babe! unquote. I can only say to my defense that I never hide my feelings or at least try not too. This chapter however I really liked at lot. Can’t see how anyone would want to sleep with Jenny, I for instance would be completely freakin’ out on the idea. The banter between Estelle, Bette & Alice was magnificent, also there was many thought put in Bette’s point of view as quoted here: “Mm hmm” nodded Bette. “you want to ruin all chances for you and Tina so that you can claim there was no choice but for you to give up. You’re going to go around doing things that would infuriate her and push her away, you will then make a half-hearted attempt to regain her trust, and when you don’t get it, you’re going to tell yourself you did everything you could but that it just wasn’t meant to be, thereby escaping the emotions you would have had to invest to actually try to have a meaningful relationship with her”This time you left me amazed!
Woah there! Great job! Are you going to make Tina have a threesome with Henry and Helena? Well both their names start with H! :D How how how?
Ok, I now know what this is : A CONSPIRACY ! I go away for a few days and some of my favorite authors post not once, not twice, but three times behind my back !! If this isn’t treachery… Anyway, I loved this chapter – and the previous one as well – the Bette and Estelle interactions are always hilarious ( in fact, I was really laughing my a.. off in the beginning of their conversation ), but I’m glad that you found a way to add “texture” to their chat and to their “relation”. After all, they can’t keep fighting all the time, right ( not that I wouldn’t find it funny… ) ? Especially since Bette and Helena seem to be willing to take their relationship seriously and seem to want it to be meaningful. Besides, even though B & E still both love competition and challenges, they’re not rivals anymore…On a side note, that sentence : ” you want to ruin all chances for you and Tina so that you can claim there was no choice but for you to give up… thereby escaping the emotions you would have had to invest to actually try to have a meaningful relationship with her ” was probbaly one of the longest I have ever read in a fanfiction ! It made me yell : ” breathe, Bette, breathe ” out loud ! Well done, V. And what an incredible high-powered perception ! I knew Bette was smart, but she really amazed me there. I also think it’s a great idea to integrate Tina’s season 3-storyline into this story, it could add a good dose of drama ( or a harsh dose of reality, depending on how you look at it… LOL ! ). That was an excellent twist and I hadn’t seen it coming.Oh, and before I forget Alice and Bette reacting in the exact same way to the Jenny/Estelle…incident ( and Estelle pouting ) had me giggling like an idiot ! That was HI-LA-RI-OUS ! All right, off to read the other version of the chapter. I ‘m wondering which one I’m going to like the best, especially considering I’ve enjoyed this one very much…
Great chapter… loved the Bette/Estelle/Alice interaction. It was very funny and sweet. I’ve only just realised that I forgot to comment on your last chapter! Stupid Monkey!
You know it really makes my day when i see a post from you! This was brilliant as usual, so funny! I hope Estelle and Alice get it on, they’d be hilarious together! i was gonna put i can’t wait for the next one but i see there’s already another one so… *scurries of to read more*