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Discovering Aphrodite
Discovering Aphrodite
“Do you think we’ll be too late for dinner?” Tina asked as she pulled her dress over her hips.
Bette turned and smiled, “I’m sure we’ll find something open this late in the day…”
“I have to admit…, until about ten minutes ago I’m not sure my legs felt as though they would allow me to even stand, let alone walk into town.”
Bette walked towards Tina, pulling the zipper up on her dress as she place delicate kiss on her shoulder, “well…, I guess that’s due to the little marathon that you initiated…”
Tina turned and wrapped her arms around Bette’s neck, “baby, you can’t open the door in a towel, with beads of water running down your body and not expect some reaction…”
Bette laughed, “purely coincidental…, I did tell you I fell asleep when we got back earlier didn’t I?”
“I think you may have mentioned it in passing…”
“I woke up in a panic, looked at my watch and realised I had fifteen minutes to shower, dry and change…, I can’t help it if you were early too…”
“Only five minutes…, if I had been on time you probably would have at least been dry I guess, but most certainly not dressed and ready…”
“I can be quick if I need to be…” Bette said with a smirk, now not minding in the least that she had been caught in, not only a state of undress, but in a state of post shower wetness.
Bette pulled on her black trousers and the sleeveless burgundy silk blouse to match.
Tina watched the outfit coming together as she sat on the end of the bed, she watched how Bette shook her hair out, letting the curls naturally fall around her shoulders.
Bette applied simple make up, and gave her lips a quick once over with her lipstick.
She turned, “there, ready in no time at all…”
“You look…, you look amazing…”
“Thank you…, you also look absolutely stunning…, you have this kinda…”
“Just fucked look?” Tina said with a smile as she glanced at herself in the mirror.
“I was going to say ‘glow’”
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well the room number says it, it is probably going b an amazing 121:)
i love this story,Also the ‘fuckhair’ was very realistic, tina has always fuckhair indeed:)
So beautifully written, like poetry. Loving it!
Hi Jo, This is just perfect. I do love the bold and go getting her attitude that Tina has. I am so used to Bette being the one doing all the chasing but this story has these gals equally matched. It is just so precious seeing them at the habourside in the moonlight, wraped in each other’s arms. Absolutely delicious. More please of thie divine delight. Your Loyal Fan.
It appears that we will have another NC-17 to look forward to in the next little bit. Thank you so much for posting this chapter so quickly. Now back to JB’s picture that you look at everyday, you lucky devil. Where on earth did you find it and can we find one anywhere? If we can’t find one, it would really be nice of you to show it to us. Maybe??????????? Thanks for posting.
****sighs*****
Oh wow, you sure know how to make a girl happy… no pun intended, or is it lol? Just read all the 5 chapters so far and as I’m not as good with words as you I have only one thing to say – AMAZING! A pleasure to read just before bedtime, thank you!
Insatiable days coming up, huh? Also romantic and well written! My favorite!
*Sigh*…yet again! Loving every bit of this story..and like i keep saying they are barely into their week,so much can happen!!..lol.im very much looking forward to the romantic week ahead..I love the assertive Tina..she`s great…but im also loving that Bette is feeling more confident with how things are developing between them!..wonderful chapter :)
Well Jo, that’s the end of another bank holiday – just a couple of weeks to the next one! As usual your writing is second to none. I can go to bed with a smile, even though it’s work tomorrow! Awesome!!!!!
That was beautiful, Jo.
Absolutely fantastic. Jo, your writing is addictive. Please give us another fix soon.
Amazing!! Looking forward to more:)
Beautiful! Thank you for this and i really hope it becomes more then just a holiday romance! Awesome! :)
What can I say that hasn’t been said before? So romantic. They are treating each other’s heart w/great care and tenderness. Just beautiful. It is obvious that Bette has fallen hard for Tina. Tina seems to have a bit more restraint but is starting to realize that this could be much more than a HR. They are meant to be together. It’s kismet. Lucky you to be able to peruse the naked body of La Beals every day, all day!!
Everyone is right Jo, your writing is like reading poetic literature. Each sentence carefully constructed to invoke in the reader the same sensory pleasure the characters are experiencing.
oooh nice. PPS
you just always leave me wanting more…just so beautiful and romanticl. Thank you and I can’t wait to see where all this leads. pps
After reading this story, it’s clear that I really need another vacation!
So utterly tender the way these two are dancing around the eliment of time. Another couple would not be that close for a while yet holiday or not. Please no heart breaks Jo. Thank you, Md aka Oma
I feel like I am melting. Bette’s whispered voice sends shivers down my spine. I am giddy with delight in how this holiday romance is moving along. I too hope that the romance is a lifetime romance.
AMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZING!!! PPVVVVVS!!!
FANTASTIC!
Simply amazing! I love this story PPS
I think this is moving right out of the realms of something short-lived…. and it’s only day 2 of them acknowledging their connection. Great update, Jo. Thank you.
so beautiful and romantic…thank you…i hope their holiday romance will turn into lifetime romance :)
SPEECHLESS!!!! PPVVVVVVVVVVS
Ah mate, you’ve done it again I’m hooked… I knew this was going to be an amazing story from the moment I read the first chapter! I’m glad you were inspired on your holiday and that you’ve had ME time to get this tale going… there’s nothing like coming back home to a few updates. You absolutely rock mate, I love this! xoxo
wonderful as always! love how romantic this story is. would be interesting to see who gives in first and asks that this not be limited to a holiday romance. love it!
damn. i’m still recovering from the previous chapter and now this. the fact that i’m in the office is not helping either. bravo!
I’m so glad I got to read this hun… WOW…absolutely beautiful & definately transported me to another time and place. Problem is it’s made me want to go on holiday! Can’t wait for the next chapter. x
that was special…thk u. is this really to b just a HR? Bette’s already totally hooked and worried about losing the confident blonde. Don’t break her heart, plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
Tina was right. No comparison.
Fantastic is right. Lovely. I want to be in Greece now. Thank you.
I love the visual quality to your writing! It really makes me feel like I’ve been there. Love this story! Thanks for posting!
Hi, dear sweet Jo! You made our hearts warm with this beautiful and romantic story of yours. We are loving every bit of it, like we were tasting the best wine to the palate. Absolutely AMAZING, dearest friend. Thanks for sharing it with us. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
Love it!
Jo, So AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! Thank you