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Discovering Aphrodite
Discovering Aphrodite – Chapter 2
Bette studied the map, deciding which local attraction to go to first. There seemed a lot of places she wanted to visit but wanted to stay closer to the town today, maybe make firmer plans the following day to go further afield.
She glanced up at the clear blue sky, closing her eyes to the sun as the warmth covered her skin. She sighed slightly, almost changing her mind about going out at all as the need to laze in the sun overwhelmed her.
“Later…, lie by the pool for an hour later…” she said quietly to herself as she made her way to the hire car that had been booked with the holiday all those months ago.
Bette took in her surroundings as she drove through the town towards the ‘Tomb of the Kings’, following the large brown tourist signs through the busy streets. She was at the entrance before she knew it, not realising how close to the hotel and town it was.
She decided it would be a good idea to walk into the town later, having noticed the myriad of restaurants leading to the harbour area. Maybe if she got the opportunity to get to know Tina better during the week she would invite her out for a meal…
But that would only be if they bumped into one another again. She had noticed the time she had gone to breakfast earlier and made a mental note to herself that she would try again that time tomorrow. It seemed a shame to waste an opportunity to spend some time with a gorgeous woman, not that she had any intentions of that when she had boarded the plane alone of course, it was a ‘clear the head’ holiday, it just happened that they had sat together at breakfast and seemed to get along in an effortless way.
Bette paid her entrance fee and made her way over the gravelly surface to the first of the Tombs, peering down the deep cavernous steps, suddenly seeing the rectangular cut outs in the solid rock.
She stood up straight, glancing at her guide book, reading how the large cut outs were for the adults bodies and the smaller for the children. A shiver ran through her as she glanced back, taking in the magnitude of what would have been all those years ago.
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(4 votes, average: 4.75 out of 5)
Ahh you laugh at me when i say tell you i can “See” this story..lol.but i bet im not the only one!..I love it, and am so looking forward to watching a holiday romance unfold..Brilliant x
And for the first time in a long time i get to be first up here!..lol
I love it!!! Thanks PPS
Thanks Jo. Looking for the next leg of their trip!
Trips out to see the sights, hopefully dinner… everything’s proceeding nicely. thanks for the post!
This is a really interesting story, Jo.
love it! looking forward to the next.
Bette has a date, yeah! Great story so far.
Now, Bette doesn’t have to worry that Tina may not want to have dinner with her, Tina asked her to it. Now, they are going to the place where the ” goddess of love” did her thing. I hope some of her love rubs off on B&T. Great post. I am enjoy this story. Please continue. PPS
Per usual….amazing. Feel good, friend.
the answer is yes…i’ll have dinner with you, Tina LOL can’t wait for more, sounds like you had quite a vacation
Stories like this I wish to go on forever. Nice dialogues and also informative. Thanks for the update!
I think they will be spending the rest of their trip together! and Aprhodite is definetly the goddess of love and she is working her magic on them! PPS:)
Yippee! Mate you are the best, thanks a bunch for gracing us with your amazing talent once again. I see that our friend “B” was first AND second! WOO HOO for her! That’s an amazing thing isn’t it? LOL! More when you can hun. xo
Yes Tina…way to go! I just caught both chapters together tonight…loved them and love the premise of this story. I have a very good feeling about this Aphrodite story and our girls.
Great story. Wonderful vacation. PPS
This is turning out to be a productive vacation for both.I like that Tina asked Bette out to dinner. Aphrodite is sure going to work her magic.
This is turning out to be a productive vacation for both.I like that Tina asked Bette out to dinner. Aphrodite is sure going to work her magic.
Nice visuals…=)
…and lucky for us, when on vacation those transient romances seem to happen in double-quick time… :-) PPS
Fantastic!
That was wonderful and can’t wait to see their dinner night. Please post more, thanks!
Love the easy rapport these two have already. Thanks for a great update.
Whewwww, Have dinner with me. I like this Tina (well, I always like Tina). Bette is down right beautiful and Tina is getting a chance to spend time with her. I sure hope that Bette will say yes.
Jo- you can’t get chapters posted fast enough..thank you for giving us another great story. pps
lovely
lovely
Hello there, dear sweet Jo! We were fascinated by how you described the surroundings and the scenes. We could visualize all of them. Such an enchanting chappy, you brought us here. It was beautiful and meaningful. We loved Tina’s straight forward invitation to dinner. Yesss! Ah, we are hooked here, and we thank you for your generosity, dearest friend. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
Oh I so love it… and dinner is going to come next. Thank you :)
very nice, a tender moment there, i’m enjoying this.
Hey Jo, Great to have you back with this new and fresh story. I am just loving the playfulness between Bette and Tina right now. There was Bette trying not to come on to strong and ask Tina out when Tee took the rug from her feet and asked Bette out. I can’t wait to find out how this all develops. More please. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Love it Jo, so happy they will be spending time together and Tina is doing the asking for dinner, in a “mere whisper.” I say now, they are both feeling the same thing.Wonderful. They are in the perfect place for love among the ruins. PPS.