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Damaged Ch. 33
Good morning sunshine. Dana said.
Morning. Youre up early. Lara stretched and put her arm on Danas waist.
Did you sleep good?
Oh yeah. Lara giggled, and Dana smiled. Dana slowly started to get up, but Lara grabbed her and pulled her on top of her. Where do you think youre going?
I need to get up.
Oh no, we got business to take care of. Lara wrapped her arms around Dana and kissed her softly. Dana slid her tongue inside of Laras mouth and sucked on her bottom lip. Before Dana could get under the covers, her phone rings.
Ughhh. Dana rolled off of Lara and grabbed her phone and answered it.
HelloHi momNo, I cant do that right nowIm at the end of my tournament, he cant stayAlright, I gotta goOkay, alrightBye. Dana dropped the phone and laid back on the bed. Lara sat up and sat her hand on Danas stomach.
Whats wrong babe?
Mom was trying to make me keep Howie for the weekend. I was trying to tell her I have the tourney, but she didnt want to hear what I had to say.
Babe, its alright. Your mom just doesnt understand you and your lifestyle. But I know I could make you feel better. Dana looked at Lara, and she smiled. Dana grabbed Lara and pulled her into a kiss.
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Later That Day
Shane put her cigarette out on the apartment building. She knocked on Carmens door and waited. She put her hands in her pockets and looked around. The door opened, and Carmen stood in the doorway with just an old shirt of Shanes.
Hi.
Hey, can I come in?
Yeah, sure. Carmen moved out of the way and let Shane inside of her apartment. Shane stood in the middle of the room and turned around. Carmen stood in front of the door and crossed her arms.
So whats up? Shane walked up to Carmen and stood in front of her.
I wanted to stop by and talk to you about us.
Shane, I really think we should”. Carmen was stopped by Shane kissing her. Carmen was caught off guard and leaned against the door. Shane pulled away, and Carmen opened her eyes.
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well as a fellow FFIC
My last message was messed up SORRY but as i was saying i really liked your story i like the way it sticks to the script and doesnt over do the lines of DERANGED as a fellow fanfic author i must say MAGNIFICO!! cant wait till the next chapter
Hooray! Shane & Carmen are back together. Thought Shane would suffer longer, but I did feel sorry for her. Hope the chick she slept with doesn’t come back to screw up her & Carmen. Also hope Shane gets her hormones in check. Great as usual.
yeah carmen and shane are back, thats great.
but hey, the alice and mark thing..I don´t think that they fit together.
Oh no,please Tina be alright. Yippe! Shane and Carmen are back together, and I agree Alice and Mark don’t fit together. Another great chapter,thank you. See ya soon.
I think it all works. Shane & Carmen… so hot. Alice and Mark… looking forward to a tender love afair. Please let Tina be well.
I love it and I am still sad that dana said that she could not be with alice just because she is having a baby most people take life as it come some run and hind and that is what dana has done she has gone to run and hide behide lara and I feel that there is still some twists to come please post very soon
AkiraCB,OMG what a way to end. Very ominous.
Can’t wait to see your next installment.
A fan.