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Daily, together and apart # 32
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You’re not a question of beauty. It is a case of love, missing, fulfilling, home,… You blaze that burned me deep inside. So present…”
“But yet, with all the possibilities, all kinds of colors, fabrics, …I still prefer you with your best clothe: your creamy, silky skin.
Bette opened her eyes to search for the two little effusive flying birds on Tina’s face: her eyes.
“And…babe…did you just ask me about the way you were dress, my darling? You’re all of these and so much more.”
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Inside Tina, her emotions mixed and melted. Her heart pounding as ever. The sense of belonging, fulfillment again present.
“I…” Tina managed to say.
“You don’t need to say nothing, Tina. That’s just …me…And I know that this could be inappropriate to the kind of talking we’re having, but…I …”
“No…it’s far from inappropriate. It’s beautiful. It´s lovely…I didn’t know that…”
" Well…” Bette got shy.
“Thanks, dear…It’s so good to here from you words of love, padded in memories. It´s medicine for the heart, mind and soul…And let me confess…At the mix party when you asked for Angelica… I know I could bring you to her bedroom, but I couldn’t allow me to stay alone with you in the same room. Dressed that way, your scent all over me, that cleavage. I couldn’t stand …you and me alone in the same room. I would deny all that I’ve been showing to you in less than 10 seconds! Alice began to see my behave that day towards you. I was do full… How can you hide something from Al… How can I let down my friends in so many ways…How I could live with so many disinteresting people after have the family I got? They’re so fucking boring… ”
Bette pointed out, “ Well…I had to be strong and I closed myself. I was so pissed and so unsympathetic. And…and they kept asking about the FATHER…I was ready to kick his ass, but that wasn’t my house. If it was they would never been there. This is not the kind of people I would want around our daughter…” Bette’s eyes began to fill with torment.
“ When I came home and thought about that…that perfect fucked world you were living in… ´cause there’s nothing perfect about it!… I got so mad! And… And you didn’t say a word … a word about all the crap they’re asking me! You said to me “Calm down…Let it go…” . Fuck…How I supposed to calm down… That´s you and Angelica brand new straight family: the Night of the Living Dead! A Dario´s Argento movie…And I´ve fucking had it… I fucking had enough!” The mocha lady stopped to organized the painful thoughts. Her hands resting impatiently on the table.
“Sometimes I kept imaging if I had did this to you… Threw Candance in your face…What you would do?”
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WOW!!!! What a talk!!!! This is so wonderful!!!!! Thanks you PPS
Sorry Boss but I have to do this…ALL HAIL TO BRAZ! Again I don´t have words to describe another perfect chapter! Thanks Boss for writting it! :DPPS
Dear Braz thankyou for the beautifull story. Your are truly portraiting the love of Bette and Tina. Forget IC and the TV show. (She had make us suffered enough). Post soon..por favor
Well, after a very difficult and unexpected evening, and a very long and heavy discussion with my gf, I sooooo needed to lighten the mood, and just had a feast of happy B/T ;-) — as expected, your post came as a dessert, probably less warm than I would have liked, something bittersweet and “chaud-froid”, like a Norwegian Omelette with a raspberry and red currant sherbet ;-), not hot enough to really keep me warm inside, but not cold enough to cool my agitated mind and thoughts :-) [just in case you did not notice : I love everything that is related to eating… and tasting… I’m so very “oral” you know… and, in english at least, ‘luscious’ and ‘lascivious’ roll so ‘deliciously’ and juicily on the tongue LOL] *** AHEM, wandering again, and blushing just like tomatoes, or strawberries, or raspberries… (you choose what you prefer) — Well, back to your post (and notes) damned for damned, Burning for burning, you really enjoy a very very very slow burn, don’t you ?!! well, luckily enough, me too :-))) and, now that they’ve gone all the way from the past to the accident and coming home together (?!!) , maybe we could enjoy some more unadulterated sweetness and happiness : I just have a *slight* feeling that Tina is just dying to try some of the toys she discovered in Bette’s closet, not to mention her “homonym” ;-))
Wow! Thud. You snuck this one by me and what a pleasant surprise to be able to see it for the first time. Braz, you never cease to amaze me with your ability to express the romance between Bette and Tina. Pure love at its best. Thank you so very much, and I’m looking forward to MORE MORE AMORE !! * hugs *
… you’ll learn French ? :-))) Is it to read poetry “in the text” or just for the pleasure of knowing another language, or for more “useful” purpose ? well, if I can help you in any way, be my guest ;-) — Did you know that, in french, the same word (la langue) designates the language and the most complex muscle we have : the tongue ;-) (probably the case in other latin-based languages) You can imagine it generates a lot of jokes about the “best way to learn it” ? – just kidding ;-) — anyway, the “language of love” (or so-called by poets) is very complex and rich, but I, as a french woman using it everyday for very casual necessities, I sometimes find it easier to use other languages to express love feelings : the “music” to the language is as important to me as the “meaning” of the words (which is dominating in french culture) : for example, I feel that Greek is much more erotic to the ear (I don’t understand it), and I prefer the rythm of the english language, which is due to the general shortness of many words, the musicality of russian, the suaveness of portuguese ‘s’ and ‘sh’, the staccato of italian… To me, the language must be “spoken”, and the best test to somebody’s writing is to read it aloud : when the words roll easily and the rythm is good, the writing is good : if you can’t read it aloud without an effort, or you tend to catch on words, and it’s difficult to pronounce, then it’s a definite sign that the writing is poor :-) — yours flows (with and without pun) ;-) (okay, now I’m blushing so much, that I will run and hide under my sheets, all the more it’s very late (or should I say very early here : 3am – I really need to sleep) and it must be midnight in your place, so I imagine you are going to leave the site too, if not already done ;-)
It is good that Tina said all that she needed to say. That is the only way that they can move forward with their lives as a family.
Holy fucking shit and beyond… (Im sorry, sometimes my fingers just take over and type whatever they like ;) actually that was my genuine reaction to the beauty of this chapter… The love, so amazingly clear, filling the air with prickling expectation… This is wonderfull, hearttouching and moving to tears… Thank you for sharing your amazing talent!
… Wow ! Right after your PM, an update ! And – ice on the cake – I’m first !! (*grins*) Well, my dear Braz, you already made my day… and I even didn’t read this new precious chapter of yours ! I’ll savour it and comment it later. Thank you for everything ! – A. (By the way, about what you just said : I have all the patience in the world, no worries ! ^_^)
thank you so much for this lovely chapter
I had been wondering if Bette still had her piercings. ;)
Thank you for your nice comment. I am really overwhelmed by your writing: so sensual full of love for your characters. I feel so much determination in how you tell this story and I am sure you have strong also a strong opinion on these topics. I like that. I will definetely read “Soft Spoken Secrets” and will let you know. Can’t wait for your update. Take care.
This is touching.
Beautiful Braz. How else can I say it but, I love the way you portray B&T…you make their connection so special. Thank you so much. Can’t wait for more!
Well, I just had a very nice appetizer wine by Zheeze, and was going to savour a 3 or 4 course meal with Chess, Robi other succulent authors, when I just saw your last post… believe me, I’ll try to resist the urge to savour it right now, and save it for the dessert :-) Don’t know if I’ll really be able to, but I’l try ;-) – I just read your AN and you made me blush and laugh so much ;-) — I’ll send you a REAL comment when I’m done with today’s “Menu”, can you keep the dessert warm (or hot if necessary) for me, please ;-)
Damn that was awesome and love it. Please post more, thanks!
Beautiful :) “Plenty of them”