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Cruel Intentions – Introductions Part 1
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Alice Piesecki rounded yet another corner in her new school still attempting to find her new homeroom. She glanced at her schedule one more time double checking that it was indeed a 2-1-1 printed on the first line. It should be right here, Alice thought. There was 210 and 208 but somehow 209 and 211 were missing in action. Alice heaved a frustrated sigh and sat down next to a row of lockers. “Are you lost?” Alice looked up into the most engaging brown eyes that she had ever looked into and quickly got off the floor suddenly embarrassed by the fact that she had been sitting there in the first place.
“Yeah, sort of.” Alice replied wondering at her nervousness. Alice was used to meeting new people and she wasn’t normally one to be consumed with such feelings. “I’m looking for my homeroom. 211.” Alice offered.
“Yeah that’s a tricky one I don’t know why they still print the schedules with room 211 on them. They knocked a couple of walls out last year and made some of the classrooms bigger. So there really is no 211 or 209. But don’t worry you’ll only have that problem with the second floor. The first floor is already done and renumbered and they’re not starting the third floor until next year. Anyway, you’ll want 210. Which is right where I’m headed so if you want to join me.” Alice watched as the beautiful girl gestured toward the door right across from Alice and then followed her. “Good morning, Miss Jenson.” She said as Alice followed her up to the desk.
“Good morning, Gabrielle.” The teacher returned her greeting. “Have you signed in yet?” She said gesturing toward a clip board that was sitting on her desk.
“We were just about to.” Gabrielle turned around to face the other girl, “By the way what’s your name?”
“Oh, I’m Alice. Alice Piesecki.” She said as she held out her hand. Gabrielle took her hand and smirked when she noticed Alice shiver a little at her touch.
“I’m Gabby DeVeaux. You should come and sit with us.” Gabby said flirtatiously. Alice smiled and then followed Gabby over to table in the back.
“Hi everybody.” Alice noted that Gabby spoke to the rest of her friends with arrogance and while she normally didn’t like girls that acted like that her skin was still crawling with heat after their brief handshake. “This is Alice. Alice, this is Bette and Helena.” Alice looked at the other two girls surprised when they both looked bored with her already.
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this if fucking awesome meth!!! luv it continue soon!
awesome story! love the concept, love the characters, love the writing. keep it up and dont leave us waiting too long!! :)
oh this is the best fanfic ive ever read!! hope you post soon :o) xx
LMAO this is fucking awesome and how really funny is it that alice is from napa, dude she could of been my neighbor LOL.
LOL, goood stuff, can’t wait for the next post!!!
Hey, where’s Mr. Piddles?
This is a great start on this story..LOVE IT…Thanks..
Keep going, its good. Cruel Intentions and Dangerous Liasons are actually both based on Shakespears “The Taming of the Shrew” Change the title, and maybe add a few more witty sarcastic quips please.
wow that was great please continue!!!!!
LOL this is great! Wonderful adapation of the cruel intentions, I kep cracking up at Dana the virgin.
ROTFLMO. This is a great take on my fav guilty pleasure.
I love this! this is hilarious! it has almost everyone! But where is Kit, and Carmen and Shane? Please continue. I love this story alot.
It’s the movie – yet new&improoved version..Great Sexci stry!..’Cruel Intentions’ is Hot – this is SCORCHING..I would definitely pay 2 watch this..Sum of these kids may be swt..But they not that Swt..Bad gurlz&Bad boiz – I like it..Dana – ideal candidate 4 perfect innocent virgin?..I dun think Dana&Tina r as swt&innocent as they play out?..& if Dane is straight(SO gay)&Al looses the bet, in the end it’s still a win-win situation..I expect sum crazy sexci scenarios in the future for these cats..Like is Shane in this?..MarinA&orCarmeN?..Jenny with Tim?..w.e you write..Thnk u, I’m looking forward 2 it..I love the way you write..Thnx 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
Hey, this is a great start. I wasn’t sure if the situation change would work but it does. You write the characters so well, I think the story would still be good even if the situation didn’t fit. Thank you.
great beginning! please post soon!
Great Start! Cruel Intentions is one of my favorite movies as well as the orginal it was adapted from (Dangerous Liasons). I was trying to figure you out the two main and I got it! :) Great job and can’t wait for the next installment
Hey crystalmeth this is great made me giggle the whole way through you’ve pinned everyone down really well – hope to see the next part soon
That’s one “fucking” amazing story you’ve got there. I love it. Pleas continue. I just hope that Alica doesn’t has to sleep with Helena. But if you follow the movie she wins. so that’s cool. Thank u for this great story, but that’s only so if everything goes perfect with Bette and Tina. Please post soon, love the story if i havent said it before
This story is so fucking good and funny, great start and all the characters in here is so funny and love the way it is. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Thisis really good. I enjoyed it a lot and if you don’t post somemore I think I might cry! Cruel Intentions is one of my favortie movies!
This is very funny, thanks for the idea. Helena, Helena everybody knows that Dana is Aice’s girl and viceversa, lol. Waiting for the next.
“Why not?” Bette asked. “The girl is hot even if she is a walking disaster.” LOL! you NAILED the characters!
i’m LOVING THIS!!! really looking forward to the next chapter (don’t forget about How Hard Can it Be? though!! )
i’m totally loving it…it’s a great twist on the movie. Where’s Shane? and Kit? and Carmen? and I don’t know but I have a pretty good feeling we’ll be seeing some of Lara later on. Keep it up….it’s fucking hilarious
ROTFLMAO this is great hope you continue and post soon!!
crystal – great job. i love it. i love how you’ve integrated so many characters. haven’t seen cruel intentions in forever – but its one of my favorites – not i need to go watch it. as always, you’re an amazing writer.
k. this is just way too fun. lol. i love it.