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    Coming Back – Chapter 5


    Previously

    After the movie, Jenny and Marina go in Jennys bedroom to get some sleep, and Shane and Carmen are going in Shanes bedroom.

    Shane : Baby, (putting on her pyjamas) can I ask you something ?

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    SHANES BEDROOM – NIGHT


    Shane : Baby, can I ask you something ?

    Carmen : Yeah. (putting on her pyjamas)

    Shane : Why you keep asking when I told you to stop ?

    Carmen : . Um because I wanted to know..

    Shane : I told you that we were to talk about that later.

    Carmen : Im sorry baby I didnt want to make you upset (looking sad)

    Shane : (taking Carmen in her arms) Its okay but, please, next time, listen to me.

    Carmen : Kay..

    Shane : Cmon lets get some sleep.


    Carmen smiles.


     

    JENNYS BEDROOM – NIGHT


    At the same time in Jennys room


    Jenny and Marina are making out for the first time since theyve seen each other Marinas over Jenny, she kisses her on the neck then lower.. Jennys liking this.

     


    JENNYS HOUSE / KITCHEN – MORNING


    Sunday, 9:00 AM


    Jenny enters in the kitchen.. nobodys there. It looks like Shane and Carmen decided to sleep in today. Jenny goes in the living room, sits on the couch and turn on the TV. Nothing very interesting, its been ten minutes now that shes just changing the channels. One hour later, Marina comes in the living room and sits beside Jenny, and kiss her.


    Marina : Morning (smile).

    Jenny : Morning (smile)

    Marina : Have you been here for long ?

    Jenny : A bit more than an hour.

    Marina : Really ? I didnt ear you wake up.

    Jenny : Ive tried not to make any noise.

    Marina : Well, it worked.

    Jenny : Do you want me to prepare some breakfast ?

    Marina : I have a better idea (smiling)


    Marina kisses Jenny then lean on the couch. Jenny caresses Marina on her hip then on her stomach. Marina takes off Jennys T-shirt and caresses and kisses Jennys breast. They start having a lot of fun when Carmen and Shane come out of Shanes bedroom. Marina and Jenny stop and “try” to put on their clothes.


    Shane : (smiling) Having fun girls ?


    Marina and Jenny shyly smile at each other.


    Shane : Very sorry to disturb you guys, we didnt know that you were here.

    Marina : No, thats okay (babbling) we.. we(looking around) we were watching TV.

    Carmen : (going in the kitchen) Yeah ! Whatever ! (laughing)

    Jenny : (going in the kitchen) Ill make some breakfast, what you guys want ?

    Carmen : I dont know, anything you want..

    Jenny : Baby, any idea ?

    Marina : Nop!

    Jenny : Shane, cmon youre our last hope !! (smiling)

    Shane : No idea.. sorry !

    Carmen : Something light.. nothing complicated.

    Jenny : M.. kay.. well its a start.

    Marina : What you guys think of fruits with croissants.

    Shane : and cream cheese ?

    Jenny : Fine for me !

    Carmen : Im in !

    Marina : (looks at Jenny) Are you sure we have everything ?

    Jenny : (looks in the refrigerator) Wait a second yep.. weve got everything.

    Shane : Excellent.


    Jenny is cutting the fruits with Marina. Carmen and Shane are setting the table with all the stuff. Once everything is prepared they all sit at the table and start eating.

     

     

    THE PLANET – EVENING


    Carmen and Shane are sitting at a table with Alice and Dana (who are not together, in this story), they are all waiting for Jenny and Marina who have decided eat dinner in a different restaurant before going at The Planet. They all talk about everything and nothing, mostly about Jenny and Marina that are back together. An hour later, Marina and Jenny have still not arrived, then Shane cell phones ringing.


    Shane : Hello ?. what ? Which hospital ?.. Were on our way!!


    Shane looks at Carmen then Alice and Dana.


    Shane : They are at the hospital

     


     

     

    TBC

    Comments

    1. This is great, I’m a “tender roni”,a sucker for really sweet and tender moments. I’m so glad that Marina and Jenny are back together. The suspense is killing me,hurry back..

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