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Collision Course 4.51 – Foreshadowing
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Collision Course 4.51 – Foreshadowing
“I have to tell you, that I think all the women of my ever growing circle of friends, are heroes,” said Alice Pieszecki into the mic. Looking at the notes she had before her, her bruises had faded, her soul, on the other hand, was far from healed.
“As you all know, six days ago, there was another attack on our country, I don’t say our great country, as most people do, because, frankly, there isn’t much great about a country that goes to war with people who had done no harm,” swallowed Alice, looking up at Quin, who was sporting her black eye, and a gash over her right eye, her eyebrow forever slashed in half, leaving a scar that would never fade. Quin’s green eyes flicked away from Alice’s troubled dark eyed gaze.
“I’m going to take the next block, or maybe I might even take the whole three hours, to tell you about what happen to me and my friends during the latest attack….”
Six Days Earlier…..
Emma looked up and towards the door, “Jo, are you feeling that?” asked the astute Asian FBI agent softly. Moving to stand, Emma could feel something stirring, a strong convergence of something very bad in the air. Since the budding of their powers, Emma’s had always been the strongest to any type of danger. Right now, as Jo would say, her web was vibrating rather wildly.
“Not that attuned yet, Em,” said Jo kindly with a wink, then she saw the dark look in Emma’s eyes. Wishing for something to speed up the process, the soft dull ache of the change was already shifting in her body, the colors of the room kept changing; she knew her eyes were varying hues. Yet, the transformation felt different than the time before, as if something were missing.
“Who hears that?” asked Quin, her emerald green eyes narrowing. The headshots dropping from her fingers, blinking and looking around, the air of the room had gotten heavier. The fine blonde hairs on the back of her neck rose to attention, casting a look at Alice, then to the now standing Emma Scott.
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JP – What frakking award are you talking about girl? I think Jo’s gotten to you somehow… award… Ok girl… LOL
Would like to say something about the awards but I afraid the sex faries will leave me. Dont let Jo lose her powers and Jack fron 24 wasnt the hero in this the ladies were. Love the minor danages to the gang,Shane will think about this for a long time to come. What happen to the people on the plane?? I know you are busy thanks for posting. thanks bvh
Good stuff! I like how you meld and twist so many storylines. Looking forward to the next installment.
I know..I know..you don’t want the award. Well, to damn bad! Deal with it Ms. JM, you are f*#king good, and deserve it. So, smile, say thank you and then post the next chapter!!! LOL Hugs J…really, congratulations. You know how much I wanted you to win. :)
Love how you wrote the past vs. the present/future events. Gotta admit when you bring Amy into the mix, I get a tad bit confused as to which lady Jo should be with. Alice, please keep your mouth shut, for once? Lovin’ it!
WooHOO!!!!!! JACK BAUER OF CTU!!! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA great job!! LOVED IT! i took my hands away long enough to read. So now of course Al is going to talk to Jo about what happened. and poor Jo with a broken leg and all. Very cool update!!! LOVED IT!!!
Great chap. You wrote that extremely well. I dont like Amy, i hope she doesnt cause any problems for my fave couple. So Jo is human again huh? Thanks for the update, PPS.
YES! I’ve been hoping for a chapter for what’s felt like an interminably long time… Thanks for posting… Now then, about the chapter: Ha! for once Jack wasn’t the hero! I really want Al to be able to keep her mouth shut. She can NOT blab about Jo… And on that note, I don’t want Jo’s powers to be diminished, or completely gone. Hey, what about the other people on the plane, they alright? And what’s the gang going to do without the Planet? I guess they could use Twilight as the new hangout… Great chapter, Janet, and many congratulations on the award!
whatever the fucking award is… give it to the lady!! u deserve it! all of it!!! OMG! what an episode… intense man, just totally intense… every moment it’s BAM!,WOW!,BOOM!,KAPOW!,YOWZA!… ETC! amazing janet. simply amazing… i really do wish i have your talent in writing and ideas… PPS!
Also, I am not as stupid as I look sometimes, – I meant accolade’s
OMG – JM, I am soooo sorry about the award. It will be okay, you may get many interview requests and when it comes to the book, I say hold out for the bidding war… F tina. (F = forget, it just looked naughtier the other way)——————————Could Shanes lips get any sexier? Bette & Tina, Amy & Jo turn to each other at a time of crises? We all know what a tease your are. Run Rosita Run!Seriously congrats on the award you deserve all the aculades you can receive.
Well thanks for the history lesson there J, though your answer wasn’t as fun as the one I got from my mate (“they” speak French cause they thought they were so cool that they needed to lower their cool levels cause the cool mixed with the snow weather coldness would have made for and uninhabitable arctic environment, so they picked the most assy language in the world to speak… he had a bad incident with the french) I have a feeling yours might hinge on accuracy. Was watching 24 this evening, have you ever considered what a Jack Bower dwarf would be like, most kick ass little package ever. Pistol whipping bad ass midget….with a really deep voice. Any way props to the award, which means you write good. And props to the whole not turning you characters into corpses thing. Have a nice day :-)
Oh and whats the story with the dude and the chick written by the guy? is it Zorro? Zorro is awsome :-p
thanks for your story JM. i really like it and glad you added another poem. i usually don’t leave comments but i do read the stories.most of my comments sound stupid.