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Closure – Chapter 26
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Dana was seeing a therapist once a week. She scheduled the appointment for the same time as one of Alice’s. She got to her’s a little late and left a bit early so she could drop Alice off and be in the waiting room when she was done.
It wasn’t that she didn’t want Alice to know. It was more that Dana did not want Alice to think that it was her situation that drove her to it. And it was Alice that drove her to seek out a counselor initially. However, Dana found that the therapy helped her in other ways. Even her tennis game was better. She wished she had started sooner — maybe she could have understood herself a bit better and made some different choices in the past.
Dana brought Alice to another follow-up doctor’s appointment a few weeks after the first one. She kissed Alice’s cheek and said “I’ll be right outside here if you need me.”
Alice was once again greeted by Abby who performed another thorough exam. Alice was healing well physically. The welt on her back was the only physical evidence that remained from the beating and it was slowly healing. Abby asked if she had any questions or issues. She felt that there was something on her patient’s mind and waited patiently for Alice to speak.
“Um… I wanted to ask… This is hard to say…” Alice was blushing in addition to her stammering speech and avoiding the doctor’s gaze.
“Alice?” Alice looked up into that comforting face. “Let me assure you that there is nothing you can ask that I haven’t heard before. I am not here to judge you. I am here to help you in whatever way I can to help you feel better.”
Alice got her courage together and said “Um… It’s about… Um… sex.”
Abby gave Alice a little grin and said in a teaching tone “Well, Alice, sex happens when two people love each other very much…”
Alice laughed at Abby’s joke and it made her finally relax enough to ask the question. “Have I healed well enough to have sex again?” She asked anxiously.
Abby smiled comfortingly and said “Yes. Everything has healed very nicely and you should not have any problems. If you do, please call me and we will get it sorted out.”
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Hello MaGoose, well if that is one of your weakest chapters I have a thing or two to learn that was so good. The emotions that you portray are so rich and so heartfelt. Both these two are on the same wave length and that is felt throughout your story. I love that Alice choose to make dinner for the two of them, she really needs to learn to love herself and with Dana’s help she will get there. Dana needs to step up and show Alice what she means to her, Alice’s reflection of this situation could bring this to a boiling point as she feels like she is taking advantage of Dana and she is nothing of the sort to Dana. Absolutely love this story. Sincerely, JC
*Nods happily* 3 and A HALF actually *puffs out chest importantly* I have a very nice handling of machinery such as computers for my age and a well developed vocabulary too =) that is probably one of my favourite Alice quotes that or the “who came up with peeper?” sequence XD. I don’t think my socks want to come back =( they’re probably frolicking through some green pastures right about now (that introduces some entertaining mental pictures). Great chap chappy ;) I WANT I WANT I WANT AN ALICE =( and her whole safe for sex thing, mhhhmmmmmm hanky panky on the horizons me thinks i do…not that a three year old knows what that is…..PPS gigglebudddddddy!
If Alice ask about having sex she is mending. body and soul She knows that Dana loves her and she love her as well.
this was another “awww” chapter, and really, if you consider that weak…I don’t even know what to tell you aside from your version of a weak chapter blows mine out of the water. I’m glad that Alice is healing so much. The simple fact that she asked about her ability to have sex is a great sign, I just hope Jackie doesn’t come along and spoil it. The cooking thing was adorable, and I think Dana and Alice cooking together would be a great way to solidify their bond. Very, very sweet chapter.
WEAK?? Tht wasnt weak by any stretch of the imagionation lol!!! Another reli well done touching chapter. With some exciting new prospects with Alice gettin healing more and more by the day lol. Cant wait for ur next post keep up ur great work!! :) x
so sweet. loved it. more please?
Me thinks you need a new dictionary because that was so not the meaning of weak! Great chap, good to see Alice slowly coming around…..my salmon is “to die for” do you prefer it grilled or poached? And I so didn’t know that there was a loose uncapped wire hanging from the fan unit in the freezer, I’m ‘shocked’ I tell you (hehe 3 down)
very sweet chapter!! so happy for alice…great work!!
The therapy seems to be working for both of them. Alice’s taking 2 steps forward and almost 1 step back. As a man who saw a shrink for most of his life, I can easily say that this is 95% real.
Swoons and falls even more in love with your story** I love them so much. They make me all happy. Magoose you are a mastermind. I want you to have my babies…Wait sorry wrong quote. I want to kill jackie with a sharp peice of Kryptonite. Sorry I am on a super hero binge. L word and super hero. Dana dressed as wonder woman. Imagine that. Sorry LOVE YOU GOOSE
There’s something to be said for not getting to read for a while and then having 2 chapters of your favourite stories to catch up on. I loved them both. The tentatvie steps these two are making back towards each other are so cute. Slowly but surely Dana is reinstating Alice’s confidence and the old Alice that we know and love will emerge. I can’t wait!
WOW how sweet was alice to make dinner for dana!!! :)
This chapter sets up so many things so strongly, both in terms of Alice’s healing and the new and growing bond between Dana and Alice. Since they shouldn’t even try to recpature what they had, the only thing that makes sense is for them to move ahead, no matter how slowly…and the everyday things absolutely become the important milestones. Well done…looking forward to more “weak” chapters –so long as they’re just like this.
cuteness… me likey… more please… please
I want to make Dana dinner!!! I’m glad to see Alice coming back to the ‘real’ world. I love seeing the interaction between them and i hope it gets better, seeing as how it is safe for ‘sex’..YAY!!!