Fan Fiction
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Chapter30.
Who do you think that is? Millie whispered behind me.
I leant back against her, relaxing as her warm arms came round my waist to embrace me.
I don’t know, but I think shes still here.
We stood for a moment in silence, once again things seemed to be a bit too quiet.
Do you want to get another room? Millie asked cautiously.
I turned round her in arms and smiled. Loving the fact that I could look into her eyes and simply be made happy from the smile I was rewarded with in return. I twirled my finger round one of the curls which fell round Millies face, savouring the feel of the soft whisper of a touch which her hair could induce.
You make me so happy. I said wistfully, as if I was just thinking out loud when in fact I was speaking the feelings that lay so deep within my heart.
I would say the same but there are too many words I could replace happy with, so I think Ill say something else instead. Millie said, seeming to take a deep breath.
She glanced to the side of me, pondering the phrase she was about to verbalise for me. I kept curling my finger round her hair, reaching in behind her ear to feel more of the silky wave of curls.
I was so consumed with admiring her I failed to notice the inner debate which seemed to be taking place in Millies mind.
What do you want to say baby? I asked, rubbing my thumb along her perfectly formed jaw line.
Millies eyes met mine and I saw then the intensity which burned in their depths. She looked at me for a moment longer with a serious expression concerning her features, then smiled as she leant down to kiss my devious digit which had since gravitated towards her luscious lips. I followed the supple line of her cheek and watched as my hand disappeared into her thick curls again.
I want to say Trix. Millie began, hesitating again. I mean, I need to tell you.
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(58 votes, average: 3.48 out of 5)
Hey Kat! How do u do that… how do u make two people who are just making out and stuff so hot!!! I am definetly for the loving first and then on with the story, followed by more loving…. ;-) Thank u for these two beautiful people!
Wow Kat….I’m with the others loving first then on with the story…..Come on, you do gotta finish what you started girl!!….You are one hell of a writer, what a way to start the morning….Thanks:)
*fanning myself* shit…
Yes, please finish the lovin’ first and then on to the rest of your fine story. Thanks for writing!
WOWTwo very special people that loves each other. That was beautiful,, Lets get them tho the states, Love this
WOW! This story was great. I can’t wait. Hurry!
WOW!!! Lovin’ first then things that go bump in the night,Then the rest of the story. Thanks for the great chapter ,Please post soon.
I love it when people are happy so yea you Kat. I have kind of run out of praise for you. You really do have a gift. I feel almost bad for not having any constructive criticism, but my mind’s blank right now. Your story is just too damn good.