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Mmm…Trix, you taste so good. came a deep voice of hot air by my neck.
I shivered, releasing my hold in Millies hair and holding her arms round my waist again. I sighed, contented, happy; waiting for the next bump in the road of life. Which I dreaded would be when Millie had to go home, the next few days were precious and I didn’t want to cloud my mind with thoughts of loosing her. But that was what was going to happen, I couldn’t go to LA at such short notice. I had my job to think of for one, and then there was my family and of course Lizzie. Not things which I could simply pack up and leave, I wish it was that simple but life just didn’t work like that.
Youre being very quiet. she whispered into my ear.
I turned round in her arms, holding her in a close embrace. Millie let out a sigh and held me back, gently stroking my hair and planting the odd kiss against my shoulder.
The truth was I never wanted to let her go, I wanted these arms to be around me for the rest of my life. I wanted to wake up every morning and know that I didn’t have to be alone anymore, that there was someone next to me. Someone that loved me and would take care of me. This sudden change in my mood took me by surprise and I tried to concentrate on my breathing, fighting back the emotions which were threatening to spill out for Millie to see.
But she didn’t need to see my cry to know there was something up, it was probably in the way I held her tightly, grasping at her back and pressing my face into her soft shoulder that gave it away.
Hey. Millie pulled back and cupped my face in her hands. Whats up Trix?
I looked back into her eyes, searching; desperately looking for the answers to all my problems.
I dont know, I guess this all seems a bit crazy right now. I said, not really able to put all my thoughts into one simple answer.
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I could see M/T as B/T and Lizze as Alice Love this story. thanks
I agree with Seahurst, I see the similarities with Bette and Millie too. I did find it interesting that Millie didn’t ask Trixie if she wanted to go to the party, maybe I am searching for drama. I am so hooked on your story and I am so captivated in seeing how Millie’s character unfolds.
This is interesting. In my mind, Millie was always your Bette, and Trixie was always your Tina…so to actually bring Bette and Tina into the story will be fun. Thanks!
Ah Seahurst its an honour to have you reading my story. You’ve noticed the similarites between Millie and Bette I see, well I do hav a weakness for Bette and Tina but wanted to create my own characters as I felt like there was a certain restriction when it came to writing about characters which already exist. But I wanted to bring B+T into the picture cus Im gonna stir somethings up! Hehe!
Ace, your comment means a lot to me because I want to write professionally but lack the courage to put myself out there like that. But if you would buy my book then at least I would sell one.
Thanku guys!
Simply wonderful… Ever thought of writing a novel? I know I’d buy it!
Great more really, really soon
My dear Kat….yet another exquisite chapter…..this story of yours just keeps getting better and better…..You are indeed a great story teller:) Thank you now i’m off to read the next chapter…..:)