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Chapter XXXII – Empire State of Mind – Dive
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Tina whistled.
“Not just the food, by the way, because the wine was truly exceptional, and they paired the different wines they recommended to the food so well, bringing out the best of both. The chef spent some time in The French Laundry, you know …” Bette continued.
“Really?!” Tina exclaimed. “The one in Napa?”
“Yeah … one of your favorite restaurants, I know,” the brunette said affectionately. “His team as a whole is first class, I’m sure. The French technique shows, T, and the presentation is artistic, too.”
“Plus, they clearly used the freshest ingredients, and we were told by other diners who’ve dined here that money has always been no object when the kitchen sources their ingredients. They apparently have the freedom to comb the ends of the earth, so the ingredients don’t just come from Hawaii,” Bette added.
“I think the pastry chef used something like ten different cocoa beans from several continents to make this … oh there are no words for it … chocolate dish is a lame description, really!”
“Stop. Stop. Stop it!” Tina exclaimed, pretending to be annoyed but her hazel eyes were smiling.
They exchanged air kisses. Then Bette mouthed, I miss you, T.
Tina chuckled, “Tom a poor substitute?”
“Nobody compares to you, baby,” Bette said softly.
“And the past two plus hours you spent with him indulging your taste buds were …” the blonde started to ask.
“Would trade it all to share a hotdog from the corner stand with you in a heartbeat, honey,” Bette cut in, and blew her another kiss.
“Not so loud, baby, he went to so much trouble to give you that experience,” Tina admonished her, but returned her air kiss.
“Who went to what trouble?” Tom asked, as he returned. “Sorry to have stood up in the middle of our conversation, Tina.”
“You went to so much trouble, Tom,” Bette said and reached across the table to rub his forearm. “I’m very grateful.”
“Yeah, Bette was making me jealous describing parts of the past two plus hours you both whiled away while indulging yourselves over there,” Tina added.
Tom smiled, pleased that he had managed to wow Bette, and then asked, “Did she tell you about the chocolate…”
“Barely,” Tina answered, interrupting him. “She claims words don’t as yet exist to describe it.”
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‘It could turn out to be a fatal mistake’ is the intriguing tempting sentence and then 21 pages later we’re still wondering!
Great Story over it’s many twists and turns and another great chapter. Thank you looking forward to 33.
Indeed still wondering about that sentence.
It is a very good and intriguing story, so many happens and it keeps you captivated to the end.
I like all appreciate the beauty of Brete, I like Tom drooling over Bette, Tina presume I like his love Bette, please keep writing and indulging with your stories, thank you very much!
I bet those fishing shops have nice little pointy knives…the kind you can strap to….well – where ever you can hide one ! The girls have to win ! Mr Green with the lead pipe in the library ! Get that snake off her path !
Love your story and look forward to every twist! I don’t even try to guess where you’re going, but just hang on for the bumpy ride. I’m probably in the minority, but I can’t stomach Tom! He is so inappropriate and disrespectful. A peeping Tom that doesn’t bother to hide in the bushes. At least Ashley called him out on his behavior. Cannot imagine Tina allowing him to be their donor and Bette allowing him to continually ogle her. Don’t imagine Bette would tolerate Miller acting that way towards Tina. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Hi, am glad you are enjoying the story, and thanks for telling me what you think. Several thoughts in response: 1) the Bette in this storyline is an inveterate flirt, something that Tina has had problems with from the start ( see early chapters in “Let It Happen” and a few chapters in “Love Soul Heaven Hell), yet she believes she’s in control of it… we’ll see; 2) all the same, she is insanely devoted to Tina; 3) and Tina feels the same. But still, there was a point when they were questioning their expectations about the other (in their own ways; in “Let It Happen”). I have to say I once wrote out a couple of chapters that threw into that (crazy) mix an issue, sexual fluidity, that seems highly relevant to people. Or maybe fluidity expressed in various ways — one chapter that was going into “Let It Happen” after they broke up, and another for “Love Soul Heaven Hell” after the chapter on cheating), that explored those issues in an interlocking way. The chapters were interesting, and took the storyline in unexpected directions, but they each didn’t fit into the flow of the books, so I ended up shelving them. I may pick up on them again, because I think the topic is… well, topical!
In the meantime, I hope Tom doesn’t turn you completely off the rest of the story. (Maybe you can give him a break … don’t we all have those male friends who we know we won’t end up dating but like playing with, anyway?) :-) hope you enjoy the rest of the ride.
ok, from the fishing shop Miller gets a box cutter to be detected by Green’s detector which gives him a feeling of being clever. She also gets 2 or 3 large plastic cable ties, makes great restraints, some plastic fishing line that can be wrapped around the neck, easy and a lot of praying! Excellent chapter. Keep going!!!! PLEASE.
I do not like all this charm
Tom play Bette, ok! He and his friend
only he does not bother to hide
Tina how much he deseha his wife.
Changing the subject I like the pace
you put this story, we give many
decorer details about the narrative.
Waiting new chapter.
10 Stars.