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Chapter XXXII – Empire State of Mind – Dive
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As Juliana walked carefully on the sand, heading towards where Bette and Tom were relaxing in hammocks, she bit her lip when she spied Bette, one arm hung lazily over the side of the hammock, grazing the white sand as she swayed.
Damn, she’s even sexier than I thought. Could barely make out her body in the dim light of the Cave, but now that I see her in daylight, I can see why Tom was so besotted with her!
She decided to walk over to Tom first to bring his drink to him. He was beginning to stir from the hammock.
“Juliana!” he exclaimed when he caught sight of her. He swung out of the hammock to walk to her.
“Oh, damn! I wanted to surprise you!” Juliana answered with a laugh.
He gave her a playful and wet kiss on her cheek as he accepted his drink. He lifted her drink out of the tray as she grabbed hold of Bette’s drink.
Bette hadn’t stirred. Tom whispered, “I think she was tired from our activities this morning. She did more diving than I did, and has been thinking about a million things, it seems.”
Juliana nodded, and whispered back as she set down Bette’s drink back on the tray, and then laid the tray on the sand, “Ashley is surprisingly going to join us tomorrow. She’s cutting short a business trip to San Francisco.”
Tom whispered, “Why? Is it because I’m here in the cottage with you?”
Juliana shrugged and sighed. “Doesn’t seem to matter that Bette’s here, too.”
She giggled after swallowing some of her drink. “Wait ‘til she gets an eyeful of Bette, though! It’ll make her think twice about being jealous of you.”
She gave Tom a friendly thwack on his shoulders, “Jeez, Tom, you said she was beautiful, but … c’mon! She is fucking hot!”
I know, Tom mouthed back, while biting the edge of his finger playfully.
He swallowed the rest of his drink and suddenly grabbed Juliana’s hand. “C’mon sexy, finish your drink so I can dunk you in the water!”
“Wha-a-a-t?!” Juliana shrieked as Tom lifted her off the floor, carrying her like a baby. “You have two seconds to finish that drink before I carry you to the water,” he said with a smile.
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‘It could turn out to be a fatal mistake’ is the intriguing tempting sentence and then 21 pages later we’re still wondering!
Great Story over it’s many twists and turns and another great chapter. Thank you looking forward to 33.
Indeed still wondering about that sentence.
It is a very good and intriguing story, so many happens and it keeps you captivated to the end.
I like all appreciate the beauty of Brete, I like Tom drooling over Bette, Tina presume I like his love Bette, please keep writing and indulging with your stories, thank you very much!
I bet those fishing shops have nice little pointy knives…the kind you can strap to….well – where ever you can hide one ! The girls have to win ! Mr Green with the lead pipe in the library ! Get that snake off her path !
Love your story and look forward to every twist! I don’t even try to guess where you’re going, but just hang on for the bumpy ride. I’m probably in the minority, but I can’t stomach Tom! He is so inappropriate and disrespectful. A peeping Tom that doesn’t bother to hide in the bushes. At least Ashley called him out on his behavior. Cannot imagine Tina allowing him to be their donor and Bette allowing him to continually ogle her. Don’t imagine Bette would tolerate Miller acting that way towards Tina. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Hi, am glad you are enjoying the story, and thanks for telling me what you think. Several thoughts in response: 1) the Bette in this storyline is an inveterate flirt, something that Tina has had problems with from the start ( see early chapters in “Let It Happen” and a few chapters in “Love Soul Heaven Hell), yet she believes she’s in control of it… we’ll see; 2) all the same, she is insanely devoted to Tina; 3) and Tina feels the same. But still, there was a point when they were questioning their expectations about the other (in their own ways; in “Let It Happen”). I have to say I once wrote out a couple of chapters that threw into that (crazy) mix an issue, sexual fluidity, that seems highly relevant to people. Or maybe fluidity expressed in various ways — one chapter that was going into “Let It Happen” after they broke up, and another for “Love Soul Heaven Hell” after the chapter on cheating), that explored those issues in an interlocking way. The chapters were interesting, and took the storyline in unexpected directions, but they each didn’t fit into the flow of the books, so I ended up shelving them. I may pick up on them again, because I think the topic is… well, topical!
In the meantime, I hope Tom doesn’t turn you completely off the rest of the story. (Maybe you can give him a break … don’t we all have those male friends who we know we won’t end up dating but like playing with, anyway?) :-) hope you enjoy the rest of the ride.
ok, from the fishing shop Miller gets a box cutter to be detected by Green’s detector which gives him a feeling of being clever. She also gets 2 or 3 large plastic cable ties, makes great restraints, some plastic fishing line that can be wrapped around the neck, easy and a lot of praying! Excellent chapter. Keep going!!!! PLEASE.
I do not like all this charm
Tom play Bette, ok! He and his friend
only he does not bother to hide
Tina how much he deseha his wife.
Changing the subject I like the pace
you put this story, we give many
decorer details about the narrative.
Waiting new chapter.
10 Stars.