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Carmine Lips: caramel skin # 9
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By the end of the week, after seven days without a word about the subject I sat with Alice and Shane. I looked them in the eyes and said calmly:
“Please, don’t say a word. Don’t preach to me or convince me it will pass .I will move on, but I need time. In my time. I don’t need pressure and I just can’t give you the details…”
They were worried. I could see it. Shane and Alice were like sisters to me and
I already knew I was too optimistic about my new beginning. I had to say something. I needed my friends.
“I…I…”
Alice was almost falling from the chair. She was almost on the edge. I had to grin.
“Al…”
“What…what, Tina!”
I chuckled, but Alice was serious.
“We’re worried, Tina! What happened, sweetheart… You’ve been so sad and silent…You can pretend to people, but we know that something happened…”
“I passed the night with a woman…”
I had to give time to words which lost the sweetness. I gave space to my body got used to the bitterness in my mouth. I let the words get used to the past tense.
“I…I made love with Bette…”
Alice smiled brightly. “Hey, girl!! I thought I’ll be the bi of this trio.
Congratulations! But, dear…It was that what was worrying you, Chris!? TK ! Don’t worry, sweetie…This is common nowadays…” She hugged me tight and I had to smile.
“But tell me who the lucky girl is!? Who is this Bette? Who is the chick?
“Bette Porter, Tina?” Shane shot.
I nodded.
Alice was in shock. “Holy shit! THE Bette Porter?” Alice was stunned.
I nodded again. The words began to dissolve in my emotion.
“How could she? You’re her student.”
“I agreed, Alice. I’m not a kid. I wanted. And I still want. Need. Crave. I am in love with her… I´ve been for a while, but I kept it inside…And now…Now it’s spread all over me”
Shane was in silence.
“But…but”
“Shut up, Al…” Shane said abruptly.
I smiled sadly to my skinned and charming friend.
“How are you doing?” She caressed my hand. Shane was always so sweet…
The words wanted to dissolve into tears. Shane tried to embrace me. I pushed her softly, gathered my thoughts, held the tears inside, forcefully and let the words explained:
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*jaw drop* You can’t stop there! What happens next? Bette obviously can’t stop thinking about her.. Braz, what are you doing to us? ;-) Post soon, amigo. X
just plain cruel you are
Okay that didn’t help any. lol
:: Shaking head:: Braz, Braz, oh WHY Braz!!! How dare you leave off right here,umm that’s just mean!!!! Come on Braz,Bette can’t stop thinking about T, I wanna know what happens next.GRRRRRR!!!! Thanx for posting babe, PPS!!!!
Ahh Braz, just AS sweet the second time around reading it. Mm-mmmm…this is gripping. Post soon my dear. * wink *
Braz… I realized that you are from Brazil…like me I must say! I from São Paulo dear… I just comment in english because I thought would be rude to write in a language that just the 2 of us understand…Anyway… I was hoping you’re from SP too that way I’ll ask you to have a “dream” with me…: ) I loved your post and hope to see more soon!Have a nice Sunday night!
Wow, that was pretty eye popping. Post soon.
BRAZ this chapter was incredible, I loved how you had Tina explain what she felt with Bette to both Al and Shane and then to recieve a gift from Bette a clock with that note,perfect Braz.
You’re just killin’ me here, Braz. I think you may be enjoying torturing your dedicated readers!!
Wow…beautiful writting.Please please post soon. Thanks
Damn that was so good and killing us here lol. Please get them together, is sad to see them like this. Please post more, thanks!
I hate cliffys. They should be illegal. Come on be kind, I wanna know what’s next!
well, that was beautiful, as always, but more bitter than bittersweet… where did Bette go ? did she leave without adress ??please, keep posting… Oh, by the way, I loved your photos, and also the music (I just LOVE Madredeus !!) : what are the cats names ? they look very much like Yin and Yang to me, don’t you think ;-) – as for my alpha-ness ?… yes, I admit I appear to be so, when in the depth of my heart I would SOOOO Love someone else to take the lead, and I would just have to follow… ;-) but people around me always keep asking for my decisions and wishes… I just hate it… but I can’t help it… and old habits are difficult to fight……… and who, do you think, would be the Alpha : the one who reads a story, even if it’s heartbreaking, or the one who just keeps writing the heartbreaking story, and torturing her readers, hmmm ? LMAO
Wow… Great… PPS
ok they need to talk bette rocks
Dear Braz, I waited so long to comment this very beautiful story of yours and the reason simply that I haved too much to say and it wasn’t easy to resume it in few lines… So let me just express for now how much I LOVE it, deeply love it, as well as I particularly admire the elegance of your writing style through all these pretty intoxicating and heartbreaking chapters – pure jewels, for me. You just achieved what is, according to my own standards, the epithome of NC-17’s stuff : a giddy mix of sensuality and feelings. That’s exactly what I feel the most exciting in this kind of scenes : no casual fuck but true lovemaking – tender or/and passionate. Quite unforgettable too, dear so talented author ! ^_^ God, I was SO desapointed to not see your name in the Cold Shower Award’s nominations… If any virtual award from across the Sea can please you, here’s mine, from the bottom of my grateful reader’s heart ! For the rest of what I’d like to express about this great story, just wait for the PM I’m concocting, ma brésilienne préférée ! (… excuse my French, Miss ! *wink & grin*) Very fondly – A.