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Black – Chapter. 22
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“Shane…” Alice looked at her. Alice somehow managed to bring Shane back to her car. She thought Shane would be better off just sitting down and doesn’t to concentrate on the driving. Alice was looking at Shane whose tears keep rolling out but there was no crying.
Alice called her name out a few times but she doubts that she even heard her. Alice holds onto Shane’s shoulders finally getting her attention, Shane’s head snapped at Alice’s direction. There were already bags under her red broken eyes. Her blue shirt is now pretty much covered with the stain of blood, it’s all smeared on the side of her face and her hands are covered with the dark stain. Shane felt like she couldn’t breathe.
“Shane… I-I need you to put on your seat belt okay… we’re going to the hospital right now…” Alice said to her, Shane looked at Alice not getting it in. Her bangs were smeared on her forehead. There was still cars around them, there are waiting for the two wrecked cars to be tolled out from the intersection.
Alice went over across Shane and grabbed the seat belt. She pulled it across Shane and put it on for her. Alice starts the ignition on with shaky hands. She doesn’t know what in the world is going to happen now. One thing for sure she had to be there for Shane, who looked like there was no point living anymore.
Alice waited for the police to give them a green light to go. She saw two yellow tow trucks in front of them, chaining the cars and off they went. Alice stepped on the gas slowly and headed their way to the hospital.
Shane and Alice parked their car in the parking lot. Shane opened the door and walked straight into the hospital. Before she could get in she stopped and turned around. She looked back and saw Alice trying to catch up with her. She walked back to Alice and making her stop and looked at up at her.
“I’m sorry…” Shane said and grabbed Alice’s hand. She walked hand in hand with Alice and into the hospital. They reached over to the desk and Shane started to ask information on Carmen and Lily.
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that is so mean………did you have to kill lily…….i mean carman my favorite an all but the kid that is to sad…know you probably have Shane become a alcoholic or addicted to drugs
Ok I did see it coming you kind of warned us in your comments. :( Poor poor Shane (and Carmen). I hope Alice will pull Shane through and will keep her sane. I’m really interested what you are going to do with this story, because it’s a great story.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO – You cant do an Ilene on us. Yeah ya can really cos you did say you had to write what was in your head. Still love your story the best…..keep it coming.See yaFAY
oh no…she’s going to hate carmen
Wow…..well I agree she is going ot blame Carmen, be intresting to see how see deals with the grief of losing her daughter, but I’m sure Alice will support her no matter what. Good story…btw I’m a Danish shipper but I’m kinda getting adictted to this story too. PPS.
oh my God… well, this is a nice story, but I’m sorry I’m a Sharmen… I agree, Shane is going to blame Carmen… but I hope not… please continue it! Kisses!
(*sniffles)….what did you have to go and do a thing like that for? :-)