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Bette Forgets 59
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Bette
Everyone has left me alone, this is what I wanted. I need to be alone, in this house, in this time, by myself. Of course, no one wanted to go but I can be very convincing. I’m walking through the house trying to grasp that my beloved has been taken, taken by the person that has made it their life’s mission to make my life miserable. As I walk from room to room I see the pleasant memories that were made in each one.
Tina’s birthday celebration by the poolmaking love in front of the roaring fireTina teaching me how to cook, or trying to anywaydancinglaughingkissingloving
I’m quite unaware of the fact that I’d been crying until I feel the soft wetness of tears cascading down my cheeks. With my hand resting against the soft marble of the fireplace I slowly drop to me knees and a strangled sob escapes from my weary body. I’m unable to hold back my tears of pain and sorry anymore.
I feel two strong arms envelope me and for a moment, a brief moment, think that it is Tina. It is not. The strong arms of my best friend, Shane, are holding me. She says nothing, neither offering condolences nor words of comfort, and for this I can only thank her. I turn in Shane’s arm and place my face in the crook of her neck feeling her arms wrap a little more tightly around me.
Carmen
I knew that Shane wouldn’t be able to stay away and I follow her, quietly of course, into the house where Bette lives. I see them on the floor in front of the fireplace. Bette is crying softly while Shane holds her rubbing her hair softly. Can no one see? It is painfully obvious to me and I am not as close as the others are. Tina’s words ring in my ears.
Nothing would ever happen between them!
Watching them now I can’t help the jealousy that flares hot and fierce. Nothing my *****! I back out of the house and watch to see how long Shane stays in the house. An hour later she comes out of the house I come out of my hiding space and I knock on the front door. After a moment the door is opened to reveal Bette. She blinks at me for a moment, not expecting to see me.
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(44 votes, average: 4.05 out of 5)
why the shitload of bad stuff on the gang? dint bette gone through the worst every period of her life and now this? is this the new way of living – tormenting ppl by kidnapping them and doing hurtful things? golly i really felt sad that carmen had to go through such torment – sigh what love does to one ?
No severe traumas here!
I’m just, you know, surprised at Bette’s forgiving nature. It makes her so much stronger than the ‘regular-Type-A-personality Bette’.
She’s amazing. Great work!
OMG..soo much for Bette to handle, especially, with what happened to her in that place. Now Carmen’s dead…hope Bette can get through that. The fact that Bette is very upset about Carmen’s death indicates she’s going to have a hard time of it. Damn…like she & Tina haven’t suffered enough. Let’s hope Shane doesn’t blame Bette…they have a cool relationship. Thanks for this chapter…please continue.
damn rk that was great. not tramatized at all. poor bette and tina. cant see wait to see where you take us next. thanks.
“Some of you are probably thinking that something is gonna happen between Shane and Bette. You can put the rocks and other items away, nothing will happen”………now this was funny! (as I place my rock in my pocket) ;-)
Now that I am finished reading this chapter, all I can say is damn! Doesnt B&T go through enough already? I almost feel sorry for them because there is always something lurking aroung the corner.
OMG you killed kenny!!! wait it’s carmen sorry about that.
FUCKING BRILLANT!!!
damm poor shane what drama are you going to bring for her? and will her and bette still be friends?? or will the death of carmen bring them closer together?. Stay tune as we will see what reabakathy has in store for the next installments of as bette forgets
motherfuckingit!! am I the only one on this site that wants so hot bette and shane action???
Poor poor Bette how much can the one person take I don’t think our Bette will recover from this
Ooohhh the drama!! Excellent chapter (I couldn’t turn the “pages” fast enough!! Fantastic story–Looking foward to chapter 60!
Damnnn this is fucking awesome, I can’t believe is Carmen I thought is Jenny but not, anyway this is to much for Bette to handle and so much pain for her, and she forgive Carmen, damn she is an amazing person. Oh poor Shane and hope she will get throught this sad news. Ok please post soon, thanks!
RK,
Nicely done. You have really managed to clean house so to speak.
Carmen is outta the picture and now is a time to appreciate hat you have and tell them how much they mean to you.
There needs to be some convalescence. I am sure that Bette and Tina both have Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome after this latest horror.
I love the way you make these characters strong and forgiving, Not sure if I would react that way.
Please continue this fantastic and fabulous fan fiction.
Your Loyal Fan.
You know it took me a little while to see carmen as the… bad bad girl that she is… but I think it turned out really well for the story…. it’s just sad you had to kill her, she was hot… and a very very bad girl… hehe great story ;)
Completely and totally AWESOME!!!! I agree that it made Bette a much better person to be able to forgive Carmen.
I really have always loved this story from it’s very first chapter. I look forward to much happiness for the gang now.
Just been doing some catching up on your wonderful story here Reba……OMG the drama and Carmen being the bad girl here…I never saw it comming. Amazing story here Raba..can´t wait until the next post…please not Bette and Shane together….Nightmare.
Poor Bette so much drama. Bette life seem to be full of all sorts of totment to live or try to live a nomal life. Bette and Tina both are pretty amaing, thanks
WOW,ALL I CAN THINK ABOUT IS POOR SHANE…GREAT JOB GIRL..JUST BRILLIANT….NEXT CHAPTER 60 THANKS…
Reba…. Loved it… sorry for the way it ended for carmen , but she wasn’t going to just leave and so you did the only thing you could.. reading on