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Bette Forgets 11
*Tina*
I am sitting watching television with Kit and I cant help but feel something is off. I cant explain the feeling exactly just that something doesnt seem right. I should go check on Bette. I shouldnt have let her take a shower by herself. I am contemplating going in there when I hear her cry out and then the sound of breaking glass.
Jumping to my feet I am down the hall, through the bedroom and am throwing open the door to the bathroom with Kit hot on my heals. Upon opening the door I am shocked by what I see. My eyes immediately fall to the shattered mirror and then to the blood dripping down the mirror. Turning to Bette I see her sitting on the floor of the bathroom holding her wrists out in front of her as blood drips down her wrists on to her and the tiles below.
Ill grab some towels, I hear Kit exclaim leaving the bathroom
I grab the bathrobe from off the door and put it around Bettes shoulders. She was sobbing like Id never seen before. Worse then she was earlier.
Bette, baby are you okay?
I know thats a stupid question but it was all I could come up with.
Bette shook her head and continued to sob as Kit came in handing me some towels. I quickly wrapped them around Bettes wrists as Kit disappeared once again.
Bette what happened? Why did you do that, I ask glancing at the seriously shattered mirror
I couldnt see, she remarked through her sobs
You couldnt see what?
Me.
Before I could contemplate that further Kit came back into the bathroom with some clothes for Bette.
You get her dressed and Ill start the car, Kit remarked leaving the bathroom
Looking at Bette I noticed that her cries had stopped and she was just sitting in silence holding her hands away from her body.
We have to get you dressed and go to the hospital sweetie, I remark motioning for her to stand up
She stands up with some help with me and I am able to get her dressed without disturbing her wrists too much. By now the towels were soaked through with blood.
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(74 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
I like this. It’s heavy but good. Great job!
pretty f*cking cute. ;)
great story please keep the chapters coming Thank you
I love this story :))
I like this story. Bette is so innocent and cute. Tina has such patience. Thanks
I LOVE this story line. You have a wonderful imagination. I apprecitate you taking the time to read my stories and leave comments. Your opinion means so much to me. Did I say that I LOVE this story? Sorry it is hard to concentrate after reading such a great chapter. Keep them coming. I am hanging on every one of your words.:-)
I really like this story. Just wanted to let you know, since I don’t always leave a comment.
Thanks for another great chapter. Love seeing this side of Bette. Love seeing the interaction between Tina and Bette.
I agree w/ everyone else, I love this story. And I love the ‘softer’ side of Bette. Please let her identify the right guy and I hope that you deliver some good justice to them.
Congratulations on another great chapter. You move the story so well and the dialog is crisp and meaningful. I’ll say it again if I have to: I’m loving this story. Your imagination is wonderful. You’ve swept me right along with you. Thanks.
I love this story. I can’t wait for more.
I love this story. This chapter had a really cute ending. Can’t wait for the next one!!
great story, can’t wait for more..
I LOVE THIS STORY..I WANT MORE PLEASE
This story is so well thought out and well written Bette’s so open and somewhat innocent, it’s refreshing I love this story–thanks for sharing your talents with us!
i like this… bette is so cute!!!
I love the innocence of Bette in this story. I hope seeing the suspect in the lineup doesn’t freak her out too much.
Great chapter again. I like to see this different side of Bette. I will be waiting to see how Bette pieces back her life as she has lost so much time.
The identification of the attacker is just one of the obstacles she has to get through. Will she able to accept what happen between herself and Tina? And how about the baby? Can she accept the way it was being conceived? Well, I will be waiting for all that parts to unravel then. I also liked the way you end this chapter too. It’s lighted just like you said.
Continue on, and I will read wherever you might lead us..:)
this is really good – it is heavy and intense but very well written. but please let Bette go to therapy before she has to identify the rapist please please please.
I loving Bette and Tina…and this story. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Great chapter. I really like this Bette, she is so funny and cute. Hope she be ok in the lineup. Post soon, thank you!
I, Too, like this Bette…she has such a funny attitude…its a great change from the Bette on the show….thanx for this and please continue soon…….
I just caught up reading your story. I love it! great job, please continue, soon.
I love this story.
I continue to enjoy this story. Good story line and nice relationship between B & T
This is just getting better and better as we go along. Now this is one story I would not miss…can´t wait for an update. Post soon
Bette will be able to make it through this with the support of her family.
i dont wanna push u but: WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER???;) i am so addicted to this story and i cant stand to wait too long for the next part. I love this story, tho its pretty sad, but i have to admit that i like Bette very much and shes even funny, who would have thought:p