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Bette and Tina… The First Year of The Rest of Their Life…ch.86
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ecstasythrumusic: still pretty hot.. and will get hotter… wink wink
bettyvhall: Thank you… you know i love your comments… you were one of my first to ever comment…so i look forward to seeing your name… and I am so glad your on the mend…
Neq8740: Don’t worry… Alice will get hers… not right away… but she will
TibetteShipper: I loved that line too as soon as i typed it…
CR00: No camera… Tina is embarrassed enough… but like i said… Alice will get hers… hmmm maybe with a camera
nzgrl: Alice just doesn’t think…
Karen G.: you are so right… i just couldn’t leave you all there… thanks ….i always love hearing from you
lost1: hey welcome back… i have missed you… bette will be bette… she is more worried about how Tina will react
Tina Kennard: bette wants to kick her *****… but she will get hers…
Succulent1: Alice is always in trouble… but now tell me… i know i would have loved to be in her shoes…
momo: your right it was funny… i was laughing just typing it
girl drummer: the heat is on in the east coast… and this story… the hotter the better… thanks
pogo74: Alice now knows… tina is not a push over… thanks…
jjll: See now this chapter is deciated to you… i couldn’t let you wait another week… and your comment gave me the extra kick i needed…thanks…
kasbre: I think they are all too worried about losing their teeth… and if they did see anything extra… well they are not saying …YET
carolann: hmmm save me a piece of that bread… and i’m sure your sauce is just as good… so James is the man… 13 times… in about 36 hours… be still my heart.. talk to you later…
pandora007: yes james is the man… Lisa must be hurting… but she’ll never tell… bette will be Bette…
cpq: i love your comments… and you must be on my shoulder… when i’m typing… so i hope i did them justice.. and please feel free to suggest anything… thanks…
AND YES JAMES IS THE MAN…
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Alice: what was thatit sounded like a scream walking fast toward the bedroom and opening the door
Bette: Begging now Pleas Teeeeee I can’t take any morePLEASE.. STOPPPPPPPPPP
ALICE STOPS DEAD IN HER TRACKS WITH DANA AND SHANE RIGHT ON HER HEELS
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Great chapter, glad T was able to laugh about it.
WHAT????? A two fer Sunday. How lucky can we get? Lisa is one smart cookie. I guess Bette is getting a little soft since Alice was still standing(Ha, Ha) Love your story.
ohh you are so mean..how could you do this? they have to finish right now..lol..ok i can wait but not to long..great chapter
Damn, Bette is getting soft. Excellent, thanks for not leaving us hanging.
Actually I rather be the one in the hangcuffs…LOL….Im glad Lisa was able to calm Tina…and Bette didnt do any harm to Alice…great chapter!
Sometimes I feel a bit sorry for Alice – always the antagonist in so many different stories. Thanks for the extra chapter today! Sundays I get to catch up a bit.
If I was bette I would of handcuffed alice and then had everyone strip her and then put her out on the front lawn naked. maybe even sprayed her with the hose
I was LMAO amanda! Alice is lucky or maybe Bette will get her revenge at another time….that would be good. Great chapter as always.
That’s what sisters are for! I’m glad Lisa was able to make Tina feel better. Alice is sure lucky!! Thanks for the twofer, Amanda!
Hey Amanda thanx for the 2 chappys. Love your story. wow what a site to see and still alice got to live.
Well atlas Bette she really comedown LOL! Hey Amanda that was so Great I Love it Please continue post SOON and Thanks.
i cant believe you just stuck us with this kind of cliffy….come on woman……post post post…..ima waitin…….lmao…….
Hey you, I just read the last two and I”m lmao. Will Alice ever learn? So what’s the secret? How can you leave us hanging like that?
Alice will get hers,She want even know until it is done. Bette is not getting soft,she just get even. Alice is always in someones business. This was funny,Poor Tina and Bette with hand cluff Thanks so much.
Thank you, thank you, I am deeply honoured. This dedication from the Queen of NC Fan Fic. Love your writing.
This was too funny, Alice is right, B is getting soft, I hope you have something for Alice. Remember “Pay back is a bitch and her name is Bette Porter”. I do believe they are your words…I still cannot believe that you blessed us with two chapters today.
You are simply the best…………..
Thanks for the updates. Bette should have kicked Alice’s ass. The girl has to learn sometime. Glad Tina didn’t freak out. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
I think you are trying to give us a heart attack you know Amanda! I can’t imagine what I would do or how embarrassed I would be if my friends walked in on me making out. I think I probably would die on the spot. I’m glad they got over it quickly though, but will Alice ever let Bette forget it?! Post soon.
twice???? lolol greaaaatttttt Manda… can’t wait
Good to see Alice wasnt going to leave the house in a bodybag lol thanks for not leaving us hanging…..Cant wait to see how they all react to the secret!