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At first sight
Story written on February 23, 2011 by kins40.
CHAPTER 17
Bette remained by her bedside for longer than usual that night. She had stopped talking a little while back and was just staring at the sleeping form in front of her. She still held her hand in hers.
She marvelled at the sleeping beauty in front of her. The whiteness of the sheets accentuated her pallor even more. Her skin seemed to have the fragility of fine porcelain and looked almost transparent. Little blue veins drew a complicated pattern on her eye lids.
By contrast, her lips looked very pink, although the air of the hospital had dried them a little.
She looked so fragile but yet so strong as she continued with her internal battle to stay alive.
Bette wondered what her eye colour would be. Surely blue. They had to be. She chuckled at her own assumption that the woman fitted the description of the archetypal blonde beauty. Whatever her eye colour, Bette saw her as magnificence personified.
She realised that despite never having had a conversation or even exchanged a glance with her, the sleeping woman had made a great impact on her personal life. She liked the feeling it brought to her existence, a feeling she had thought had been lost a long time ago.
She sighed heavily and smiled at her broadly. She knew it would go unnoticed but she smiled none the less, she could not help but express her budding affection for the blonde.
She stood up from her uncomfortable seat and leaned over the bed. She hesitated for a second, "Was it acceptable, was she entitled to do that?" she thought to herself. She shrugged her shoulders and carried on with her movement and pressed her lips to the sleeping woman’s forehead. At the very same time, a double bleep registered on one of the monitors in the rooms. "Oops," she thought "I must have disturbed one of the wires!" She looked around and saw that nothing was out of place.
"Goodnight T," she whispered into her hair. "I won’t see you tomorrow, I am just going out of town for a couple of days, I’ll come visit as soon as I’m back" she added.
And with those words, stopped to talk to the nurses on her way out and was soon on her way.
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(30 votes, average: 4.33 out of 5)
Wow! She had dreamt about Bette and Dana while it was in coma, for this motive in his dream Tina was not seeing. Excellent plot. /// Huummm!! It will be which Bette will not find Tina in the hospital when she return????
I’m starting to see the light… I think. Nice chapter, thanks!
wow… so glas she is waking up… and now the questions and answers… love this… great job… pps
Okay, my mind is clearing and the light bulb is beginning to get brighter.
Kins40.. Thanks for enlightment :-D now where do we go from here? ;-) looking forward to your next post. PPVS :-)
Just an awesome story. I can’t wait to see where you take it.
Awesome plot. I was hoping Bette would be there when Tina woke up.
Damn, she’s waking up and Bette isn’t there to see it. Great update. Thanks for posting.
Thanks God Tina wakes up.Looking forward to the next chapter.Amazing story.Thank you.
Awesome plot!!!!!! PPS!!!!
Just like msfs said Great plot… I’m excited what’s gonna happen next! Damn Bette is not there when Tina woke up…Hurry Bette, Go home now!
Love this story, excellent chap! Now the sleeping beauty’s awake;))Please post soon!
I’m still a bit confused, but at least she’s waking up and I’ll soon find out what’s going on.
Oh so glad this chapter has put a smile on my face. I bet tina isnt blind.
HEy kins, OMG! OMG! OMG! Tina is re-entering the world onf the living. SHe has been in a state of suspended animation long enough. Now, I really want to read if and how Bette remains in Tina’s life. Will Bette be the rock; there to support, encourage and nurture Tina’s recovery. Will a budding romance begin during Tina convalence? Whatever the answers I can assume a brilliant read. Many thanks and more soon please. You are making my day with these regular posts. your Loyal Fan.
Hmmmm, this is very intriguing. I was kinda hoping the Bette she met in her dream was the real Bette instead of the one who found her after the car accident. The way they met and immediately connected was so sweet.
Glad that she wake up and now let see more of her!