Fan Fiction
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Appreciation
11:00pm
It had been a long week of arguing for Bette and Tina since the discovery of the video Jenny had emailed before she had committed suicide in their pool. Tina wanted to believe Bette when she said she was merely picking up glass from the floor, but the video look very realistic, and Kelly said that they had been together. If they weren’t in New York City, all the way on the other side of the country, Bette would have wrung Kelly’s neck for being a lying bitch.
“How are you gonna take her word over mine Tina?” Bette cried, her tears spilling out of her eyes.
“And the video?” Tina retorted angrily.
“It’s bull shit!” Bette yelled, “I promised you I wouldn’t do this again Tina! Look into my eyes! You know I’m not lying!”
Tina stayed silent for a moment, looking into Bette’s eyes before saying, “I’m not sure I do.”
“Ahhh!” Bette cried grabbing her keys and marching out of the apartment, slamming the door behind her.
The loud noise woke Angelica, making the two-year old wail. Tina sighed and walked over to her daughter’s room.
12:00am
Bette didn’t know where she was driving, she just knew she wanted to get away. It had been raining for almost an hour, since she left the apartment. In a sudden burst of rage, Bette slammed her hands hard against the steering wheel and yelled out at the top of her lungs, “fuuuuuck!”
She slammed her foot on the gas pedal, overpassing a signal light. She ignored the blaring horns and kept driving forward. Her Saab purred lowly as it sped through the streets of New York City.
She drove onto a bridge, zooming through the solitary street. Then she slammed her foot on the brakes when she saw the middle of the bridge opening up to let a ship pass by. The car screeched as it slid over the floor. Bette rapidly turned the wheel, trying to gain control of the car, but it only made the car flip over.
The car rolled all over the street, becoming completely totaled in almost an instant. Bette felt her body being slammed into everything in less than two seconds. She felt glass impaling her skin, she felt bones snapping, she felt her head banging repeatedly on the steering wheel. Then everything went dark.
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Amazing start! PPS!
AWESOME. This is going to be GooooooooooD.
Great start! Heartwrenching, but great.
Great start. PPS
Whoa…intrigued!! Please continue.
OMFG, amazing, I’m hooked, just got in from my night shift and the first thing i do is read your new story it was GREAt PPS, i need to know what happens next!!!!
Really frightening.
Amazing and very dramatic start! I love it.
Damn, Bette in the hospital and with amnesia. Glad the rocker guy found her. Hope Tina comes to her senses and starts to check hospitals. Great and different beginning. Thanks.
Great start,but now PPS.
If you let her die, I’ll be angry… PPS!
This is good and please let Bette be ok. Please post more, thanks!
Good start. Can’t wait to read the next update,. thank you.
So this was just chapter one of ?. PPVS. What a chapter. Hey, based on the view of the video I believed Bette cheated too. Can’t blame Tina, she was flirting with Kelly. I hope that things gets better soon.