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And The Winner Is! Chapter 46
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PREVIOUSLY
Carmen: You can’t defend a man who had his hand in the attempted murder of your brother.
Helena: I don’t think he had anything to do with that.
Carmen: Helena you are a divorce lawyer, not a criminal lawyer.
Helena: What’s the difference……now really think about that…(pause) Honey look, I’ll ask Bette and if she says no….then I won’t.
As Carmen and Helena were approaching Tina and Bette they heard a burst of noise. Mark, Carmen, Senior and John recognized the sounds right away. As all four of them reached for their guns, it was too late.
There was a ton of gunfire that came piercing through flesh after flesh; tons of choking gun smoke; anguished moans and many bodies falling to the floor. After a few minutes when the smoke cleared, all that could be seen were bodies laying everywhere. Moans and cries of the injured. The floor was covered in lifeless bodies marinating in blood.
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As the gun smoke cleared, basic vision was tinted in blood. John looked up and made sure that Dana was ok. When he knew that his only relative that was living was fine, he ran straight over to Senior.
Senior: I’m fine but Foxy’s been hit………John she’s losing a lot of blood.
John: Oh SHIT……..man I didn’t see this coming!
Senior: What the FUCK happened……Where are the men that were guarding the place?
John: I don’t know.
Senior held on to Kit as the blood stained his clothes.
Senior: Go get fucking help……..Foxy baby…..please don’t leave…..I swear I’ll get the bastard that did this.
Shane tried to move but the pain was unbearable. She moved to her left side and there was Bette. For Shane this was like reliving that horrible night. The night she’d lost the love of her life in a car accident; her precious Sonia.
Alice tried her best to move from under Mark. His body was so heavy.
Alice: Mark……please…..I can’t move…Mark baby?
When Alice didn’t get a response, she looked down and saw the blood that stained the back of Mark’s jacket. When she noticed that the jacket was absorbing more and more blood, she knew he had been hit. She began to scream and move from side to side.
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Hey S, this sure was bloody and to think that Cheryl was up to the whole thing,,,,but how did she know about who was to get hit,too many questions and not enough answers,,LOL,,,great chapter S!!!
HAPPY TIMES AGAIN! man this reminds me of a movies cops gone bad,equals a bloodbath..Yikeesss bette do not freak out….please.. p.p.s. u drama queen women..
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!
ok if memory serves me… this is where you left off the last time… ok babe…i’m ready… PPS
Oooo they saved the baby, this is such funny drama….what an imagination you have LOL…more :o))
I have been waiting and waiting for the next post. I love this story. I can’t wait til Bette finds out she is with child.
Poor Madelaine, just a doomed plot device…
Please don’t let Bette freak out about the baby and run out on Tina. Tina is going to need her now and Bette is really going to need Tina when they find out that it is Bruce and Cheryl who are causing all of this mess. Kit has to make it. She is so close to revealing herself to her baby sis. Mark has to be okay also.
Fuck this is bad and drama keep coming!
Dang! What a bloodbath! But now, the drama is only going to continue…and don’t make us wait so long, baby, for the next post!
Wow! Please don’t make us wait long for the next chapter! Thanks for getting this out!
Looks like both Senior and Cheryl need to look into their hiring practices, doesn’t sound like they’ve recruited the most reliable people for their purposes. I guess they can’t go to Monster like everybody else, though. This may sound cruel of me, but as this is fiction, I hope they were wrong about saving the baby. Bruce’s offspring don’t belong in any world. And let’s keep those chapters moving through the pipeline, Ms. Succulent.
Hey Suc, Great to have another brilliant post from yourself. What a shocker! From the hail of bullets so many were hurt; fatally, seriously or with flesh wounds. The dust is bringing to settle but looks like a second storm is on the way with this latest revelation. What will Bette think is going the hell on? Is Bette also pregnant? If so, will she find out now? What a mixed up and crazy world this is. One that is essential to well being. I just gotta know what is going down so please continue this exciting and entrancing entertainment. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
=O Okay Bette don’t jump to conclusions.
Oh my god so not fair we have been waiting forever to see what happened and nowwe get another tease.I agree with Lamentamini please let Bette not jump to conclusions she knows Tina was drugged and hasen’t been with any men since they both met.
Who wasn’t hit in this shoot-out? I am glad Tina was ok, but I agree w/ another commentor who doesn’t want Bruce’s demon seeds roaming the earth. I feel sorry for Cheryl once Senior finds out she was behind Kit (“Foxy”) being hit. Where is Bruce? I hope they get them, so everyone can have some happiness. PPS.
what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pms
WOW what a blood bath. Who all were killed or injured? What about Madline? Senior is going to be soooo pissed off when he finds out that it was Cheryl, because he could have gotten rid of her earlier. Heads will roll and number will be taken once Kit is out of danger. Mobsters do bad and illegal things, but they also have a code of ethtics and don’t think well of outsiders coming in and killing members of their family or the other Mobsters family or organization. Cheryl should be in DEEP DO DO. PPS :o).
aaaawwwwwwwwwwww hell, almost a massacre!!! pps
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Damn, Damn, Damn! I for sure thought that this was how Tina was getting rid of the kid. Guess not! Boy is Cheryl in for it when Senior, Bette and Helena all realize that she is responsible for this tragedy. PPS!