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All Hallow’s Eve (6) – Final Chapter
Leisurely, Tina brought a grape to her mouth, feeling the part of a Persian Empress as she closed her lips deliciously around it. She was relaxed in her chair, her head just supported by the back of it.
"Good girl," she purred, massaging the back of Bette’s head in her lap, teasingly. "Mmm … you know I love grapes."
Bette said nothing, but continued to move her tongue in concentric cirles. Not only had Tina been wet with excitement upon watching Bette serve her the food, but even moreso when commanding her to turn and bend over, wetting her fingers with Bette’s own excitement. With her tongue still hard at work, Bette closed her eyes and moaned at the memory of how Tina had brought her to her knees. She loved feeling like Tina’s personal slave at times like these, completely able to deliver multiple orgasms to her beautiful wife.
"Ah … you know this is … hard for me … when you do that," Tina whispered, smirking when she felt Bette’s tongue enter her. All of her control seemed to blur, and she felt more at the mercy of this woman in her lap. "Ahh … so good …" She was entering another state of bliss, bringing her propped-up leg a little closer as she suppressed a whimper. Bette could be so evil in her own way, and she loved what it did to her.
When she felt Bette’s hands on her thighs, she had to compose herself enough to speak. "No …. hands …"
From the way those hands felt on her, pressing comfortably in place, Tina understood Bette was only touching to keep them apart when Tina came crashing into another climax.
The shallow breathing was not a sign of strength, but one of weakness, and Tina collected herself enough to reach over for another grape. Maybe some teasing would distract her – or Bette – and give her a sense of her own dominant power. She had wanted this evening to be based on just that.
But when she looked down and saw Bette’s sweet devotion to her, the physical connection so great, she melted. Bette was obviously enjoying the act, and growing hungrier for the release Tina had been trying to withhold. Purely from the evil of her intentions, of course. "I’m glad you love this so much," Tina finally breathed, parting her legs even moreso with Bette’s strong touch. "You’re so … oh god, you’re sooo good …"
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(26 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
perfect All Hallow’s Eve, perfect story!all about trust, love, and romance.always enjoy your story and thank you for that!
OK GR, I bow down! lol. That was fantastic. As other readers have said you can really see the trust/love. Thanks for sharing such a great story. All the tiny details really make it. Already waiting for your next ;o)
Amazing.looking forward to your next story.Thank you.
Applauding* Awesome, and every other good adjectve that I don’t have enough space for, story. Geez GR you make it so f’in sexy. I’ll take whatever you have left in you to tell. Thank you *bowing down to you*
Great ending, thanks so much for sharing :)
AMAZING!!! Thank you PPVS
Wow! Excellent ending to this story. Thank you.
Fantastic GrindRight simply fantastic. I should be studying for my exams which start tmr. But I tell you, this is way more interesting than those darn rocks I have to study!! This (pardon the pun) ROCKS more. :D Thanks for sharing and can’t wait to see what you’ve got up your sleeve next. :)
Fabulous!!! I can’t wait for the next! ;)
Love it! What a wonderful, loving, trusting relationship they have! Well done! Thanks for sharing!
Hey GR, you gave this wondeful story a fitting finale as Tina and Bette accepted their roles and played out the game.I do admire Tina’s wicked streak and Bette’s endurance.There is so much love, understanding and affirmation evident in your words.I would love to read a sequel to this marvekkous torture some time soon. Perhaps with other playmates engaged.Thank you so much for the time and effort of sharing your stories with me.Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
This was an excellent story GrindRight…The love and trust between the two is awesome and you are a wonderful writer and I can’t wait for the next story.
Amazing chapter as always. It’s all down to trust. Love how you write these two characters in your storytelling. Thank you!!
Oh damn that was fucking hot and awesome, love it. Thanks for this wonderful story !