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Alice and Dana – How to get back the love of their life? Chapter 16
Side B
Dana still getting freezed. She doesn’t move.
(God what’s wrong with me? My heart is beating so hard. I want her so hard now that I’m not sure to can finish the match. Yes the match I … *****! The ball! I lose a set against them)- Dana
Lara comes closer to her “well we lose the first set” “Yeah the second will be diferent” added Dana.
Side A
“We have to talk now” whispered Joan. “About what?” Alice makes an asking gaze. “About all” and to Dana ” I think we need a break” said Joan.
Side B
“Yeah” agreed Dana
Side A
“We gonna take something to drink, do you want anything” asks gently Joan to Dana and Lara
Side B
(Alice, now in the lockers room)- Dana “No nothing, Thanks”
(You, your hand, your lips, your…)- Lara “Maybe a soda, a cold soda, please”
Side A
“We’re back in 5 minuts” said Joan and takink Alice’s hand in hers they make their way inside the country club.
“So?” asks Alice
“So.” answers Joan
They laugh again. “No seriously” began Joan “We’d already win the first set, Dana is clearly crazy about your pigtails and your underwear, and Lara seems to be attracted to me, Its a great night!” said cheerfully Joan. “Yeah when you forget that you almost fight with Dana, that Lara hitted me with the ball and that we don’t win the set loyally, maybe its a great night” said Alice. “Loyally?” “Yeah I mean playing tennis, you know. It was just distraction, we’re not playing tennis” added Alice. “I’m sorry Pisky, but its was not just distraction, we’re play tennis. Plus you play a great tennis” rectify Joan. “Really?” asks Alice, its the first time that she had a compliment for playing sport. “Of course” just answer Joan. “Oh have you though to how rectify your mistacke” asks Alice. “Mmh I have an idea. Dana is a fighter but if I don’t do something she’s never gonna take a step to get you back” said Joan with a borried voice. “I know, she’d been always like that, but I love her more for that” said smiling Alice. A smile that only Dana can give her? Joan who has remarks that smile jokes “sooooo cute”.
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Celineta, another great chapter. Alice getting hit by the ball, sooo funny. Now Dana needs to get her girl back. Can’t wait to see who wins the match.
Hello my number one. You already know how much i love the fact you posted today to cheer me up, so we’ll leave that between us. The chapter was brilliant as usual. All that tension and Alice getting hit in the face was funny. You know i love the story and im loving Joan even more with every chapter you write. Slan,Lxxxxxx
WOW..I fukin luv this story..great chapter..Post Soon!..
Well what is Dana doing to do to get Alice back? post soon.
Win,lose or draw,they all win. Alice get Dana and Lara gets Joan. Love Joan.I believe will be unhappy with Alice when she find out that Joan is Alices couisin. Love alice panty so do Dana.. write more soon. THANKS
yay! are you getting close to bringing them back together? i hope so! post soon.
The tennis match was fun! Two things I can’t wait to read Dana’s reaction when she finds out the truth about Joan and Danish getting back together. Soon please
I love it i am in a fit of laugher most of the way though this please post soon