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After the Kiss: Chapters 26 to 28 A Woman of Her Word
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Tina – It was kind of fun to have women hitting on me …
The brunette looks up at her.
Bette – Fun?
Tina – Flattering …
She looks down.
Tina – I’m sure you know all about it.
Bette – You were having way too much fun!
Tina – Well … I now have something to compare.
Bette – Compare?
Tina – You with other women!
Bette – Huh! I don’t like this …
The producer looks thoughtful.
Tina – You were so elegant when we met … refined … sooo …
She caresses the brunette’s lips.
Tina – … smooth when you kissed me in your gallery …
A smile appears on her face.
Tina – … so sensual at David Ross’ party … made me melt …
The gallery owner smiles.
Tina – The women tonight were much more direct … plain.
She kisses her girlfriend’s forehead.
Tina – I much prefer your ways, babe …
Bette – You’d better!
Tina – Too bad I haven’t had other girlfriends before you …
Bette – What?!
Tina smirks.
Tina – Alice is always telling us these wild stories …
Bette – She hears more than she experiences it.
Tina – I wonder how many stories like that you’ve experienced.
Bette – I don’t need wild.
The producer smiles warmly and strokes her hair.
Tina – How many girlfriends have you had?
Bette – Umm … I plead the fifth.
Tina – Tell me …
Bette sighs.
Bette – What is your definition of a girlfriend?
Tina raises an eyebrow.
Tina – Hmm …how many women have you had?
Bette – More than I would care to count.
Tina – Dozens?!
Bette – Umm … kind of …
The producer frowns.
Tina – Many dozens?!
Bette – No. A couple of dozens ….
Tina – You are such a womanizer! I only had sex with four men before you.
Bette – Just four? I thought all the LA men were crazy for you!
Tina – Even if they were … I was not going to sleep with them. You, on the other hand …
She pouts.
Bette – I don’t sleep with every woman who flirts with me.
Tina – I’d hate to think of how many dozens if you did …
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Poor Tina…..when you discover that you love a woman, there is the discomfort and the fear that accompanies coming out to your friends and family. Not an easy process nor is it an easy conversation. Some accept with joy and happiness. But many will reject and chastise you. For suddenly, the coming out person is not the person their friends and family thought they were and they simply do not know how to respond. And for the person coming out, there is the fear of rejection and disappointment for living the life which seems so natural and freeing. And until you go through it, you never know for certain how its going to turn out.
Poor Bette – its not easy to be the hidden lover. She wants to announce to the world that she and Tina are together and until Tina is ready, that simply cannot happen. They have made the first step by indicating to Eric that Bette was attracted to Tina and Tina telling Meg that she had been dating Bette for a month. So we will see how this goes. If Meg gives a supportive understanding response, coming out at work will be the next step. Family will be the last step and the most difficult. Fortunately Tina is a self-supporting adult and not dependent on her parents for food and shelter. At least she will be able to continue a normal life regardless of how her family responds to this information. Loss of their relationship will be painful, but it may only be temporary.
This chapter was very well written. I feel the hurt and pain Bette is going through. She is so in love with Tina but feels so much hurt by keeping it private. When love is new, there is never enough together time. And when you are not with them, its painful. Even Tina is missing Bette even though she surrounded with friends.
Love this story….
Thank you for the new chapter!
Tricky situation. I think i understand both sides of them, but Tina leaving Bette’s house in such a hurry was a little harsh, no? I hope Bette wouldn’t do something that she’ll be regret later
P.S. sculpture Desert Bloom, hmm :)
Doesn’t every author secretly wish to be a part of the story? :D
:)
A nice Chapter in this great Story.
Thank you for posting.
I love your way of writing and your version of these Characters.
Please post again soon.
SG
I hope Meg reaction on Tina’s news wouldn’t be negative and she’d support her friend.
Second – i think Bette and Tina needed more discussion about their relationship and where and with speed there both comfortable with this relationship.
And third – Bette, just go home, alone.
We are always afraid of her actions, aren’t we? Let’s see what happens! :D
I feel for both of them!
Tina took the first step to come out to Meg, i really hope that Meg will support and accept her and doesn’t shake it of as a gay fling.
It is hard for Bette to stay quit when she wants to let know the whole world that Tina is her girlfriend. I admire her that she talked with Eric about her attraction to Tina before she was going to sell that sculpture to him. Maybe it will cost her him as client, but she made the right decision ????
Looking forward to the next chapter!
** one tiny spoiler there so don’t read, fellow Tibetters ! **
My dear talented author,
I just had to express how much I love this chapter because it truly is a masterful way to depict our dear two’s emotional turmoils at this moment of their story, such a pivotal one since no “l word” has been said yet,
Tina discovering so new emotions in her life and fearing all the lifealtering changes, Bette being afraid that all this could only be a gay fling for Tina and also being afraid to be in love for the very first time of her life, everything is depicted so truly…
Since I already read the first version of your story – her was the tiny spoiler I talked about ! – , I know what a marvelous supportive friend is Meg and I had to say it : from all the various best friends of Tina in so many stories I read all these long years, your Meg is the one I always remember better and with tenderness : she’s funny, deeply endearing and wonderfully supportive. A true best friend !
And this kind of chapters are the kind I love because they’re emotionaly powerful.
I’m so deeply emotional myself, for the best or the worst, so I love nothing more but feeling so deeply moved by a story about my favorite couple.
Following your so nice private message, I have to say that I will always prefer a simple kiss scene full of and feelings that the hottest sex scene without real emotion. With writers like you, Bette and Tina always make love and not simply have sex and that’s essential for the deep romantic heart I am :-)
Thank you SO much for this amazing new version of your story, dear dbff !!
A.