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Actions Speak Louder than Words chpt. 47(from Is Love Enough)
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They both head to the bathroom and open the door…Dana puts her hand over her mouth…
Dana: Al….
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PLANET INTERIOR
Shane: Helena get off of her
Dana: I thought that you were long gone
Helena stands up…She wipes her mouth…
Helena: From the CAC yeah but not from the planet or any other area in Los Angeles
Dana goes over to Alice…She is intoxicated real bad…Her eyes are rolled back in her head…She tries to talk to her
Dana: Al how may fingers am I holding up?
Alice: 25
Dana: God Alice you need a mint. Shane can you help me get her to the car?
Shane: I’ll get one arm and you get the other arm
Dana: Ok. Stay away you preditor
Helena: She came to me I never came to her
Dana: Why would she come to you?
Helena: Because there is something that you are not doing right
Dana: Is that right?
Helena: You saw what I was doing. It all counts for itself
Helena turns towards the sink and turns the water on…She smiles at Dana in the mirror
Dana: You are pathetic
Helena: Yeah and so are you and the rest of your friends. Especially you rockstar
Shane: That’s it I had enough from you
Shane goes over to Helena…She pushes her back against the bathroom mirror…She looks her dead in the eyes…
Shane: Your bullshit that you caused us is enough. I am tired of hearing your voice. I am tired of your selfish ways. I don’t ever want to see you walking or better yet driving around. Because I swear to you and the man above if I hear or see you again there won’t be one street that you would be able to drive down without being hurt. Do you understand me you ***** hating ***** ***** always coming up on someone else’s leftovers. Why don’t you try spending the same amount of time on your children then maybe your ex wouldn’t try to take them away you dumb ***** maggot
Shane releases Helena’s jacket that is clinched between her fists
Shane: Get the ***** out of L.A. Your not welcomed here Ms. Peabody
Shane goes over to Dana and assists her with Alice…Helena breezes past them and heads to her car…She starts the engine and she is off…Dana and Shane get Alice into the car…Before Dana drops Shane off she drops off Alice…They both put her in bed to rest off the alcohol…They make their way downstairs and back to Shane’s house…Dana pulls up and Shane gets out…
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Alice has a lot of explaining to do…thanks for posting twice!
yeah Alice move your ass and go clean all the shit mess you made..but i´m still piss with Tina what kind of realtionship she think she is? if she is not willing to trust Bette then this is a wast of time..great chapter go on!!!
Thats right. Alice needs to get her shit together, real quick and be a woman do what she needs to do. This is effecting other people and thats mad selfish. But something tells me shes gonna need everybody with her to get through to Tina. She aint playing, and is pissed, as she should be. Excellent update, I cant wait for the next post.
ok so I think from what was written Tina knows she over reacted. So y the heck isn’t she back at Bette’s making up? And Alice better make things right, and Tina has some issues to get past 4 sure!!! Thanks 4 the special treat of posting twice in one day!! Looking forward 4 2morrow!!!
wow..thats all i could say..keep going please.. i wanna see what happens between tina n bette..
Alice, Alice, Alice! Lord…the drama! Please post again soon.
Dang V., I leave for a couple of days and before I can get caught up, you post again. What’s really going on!! First of all why are these friends playing a Truth and Dare with sexual over tones. These women are not teenagers, please let them act like it. Tina should have at least let Bette explain, and knowing Alice (with her batty A**), she should have known not to jump to bad conclusions. Tina was there when Bette and Alice kissed and Bette pulled away and asked Tina if she had a problem with it. As far as I am concerned, Alice has always been a pain in the butt, and really needs to get a life of her own. I don’t think that Alice and Dana should be together. They both need to date someone OUT of thier friend and family circle.
Could we please just let Kit have a successful hetro hook-up. THANKS!!
oh boy….it’s on now. can’t wait for the drama to unfold. thanks for another great one. and i think dana is making the right decision here. she can do better than this alice.
Damn this is so fucking crazy and Alice has alot of explaining to Tina and Bette. Post soon, thanks!
K
well shit. I hope Alice can fix things. Can’t wait for more.
I don’t know what direction you are planning to go next but I was thinking that when Alice gets to Tina and tells her the truth, Tina should realize that by not trusting Bette again and not letting her explain she may have taken things too far this time. When she gets to Bette I think Bette should not be so quick to forgive her. Bette should sit her down for a heart to heart talk. She has shown Tina nothing but unconditional love and trust. This could be Tina’s wake up call. If she realizes she could loose Bette it could help her learn that she needs to let go of all her suspicions and mistrust and give Bette what she desearves, her trust and unconditional love.