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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 32
Chapter 32
Bette missed on the first Tee today. Landing in the rough. She got a bogey on the first hole. Tina could see that Bette was angry at herself.
On the second Tee, Bette looked over at Tina. Tina smiled and mouthed ‘I love you’. Bette smiles and then concentrated and the swings and hits the ball. It lands perfectly in the middle of the fairway. Bette looks over to Tina again and mouths ‘thank you’ back.
Bette keep playing great. She has played Par on every hole except the first one. She is now on fairway at the 10th hole. Karen has also played well, she has played par en three birdies, so she is catching up to Bette. Bette is getting ready for a fairway shot, if she hits it perfectly, she should get the ball onto the green. She swings, the crowd is silent as they follow the ball. It lands, they cheer and clap their hands. The little white ball lands on the green. She has now a chance of a birdie.
Karen wasn’t so lucky, she had landed in one of the fairway bunkers.
Bette made birdie, while Karen had to take a bogey. Both of them played Par up to the 18th hole.
Bette is getting ready to Tee off at the last hole.
‘I have wonI made it, there’s no way I’ll give away a 5 shot lead. There’s no way.’ Bette thinks to herself. She looks over at Tina a quick second and then swings. And as usual, the ball lands on fairway.
Tina gives Bette thumbs up.
Then Karen tee’s off, also she lands on fairway. They walk together.
“Looks like we’ll be touring together again.” Karen says.
“Yeah, it looks that way.” Bette says and smiles.
“I admire you Bette, I really do.” Karen says. “I would’ve given up.” Karen says.
“I did that in a way in the beginning, I just had to accept that I wouldn’t be playing anymore. But then my leg got better and better, and then I saw the possibility. But I couldn’t have done it without Tina. She has been my rock.” Bette says.
“Yeah, she seems like a remarkable and wonderful person, you’re lucky Bette. Hold on to her.” Karen says and smiles.
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Awww… I’m first ! (childish smile)
… and I’ll come back very soon after having savouring this new gift !
Simply have to say that you write a great story. Keep it up.
Thanks for the post and they can have a really romantic dinner right there in the room…BUT I bet MOM will call.. Post soon
Well, well, Tina’s mother seems in the right condition and that’s great. But the father, god ! Next to this awful and stupid heart of stone, Melvin seems such a dreamy dad now ! I wonder what will be able to bring a bit of humanity in this man…
Ah, it was so cute to see this more than ever amazing connection between our marvellous two during this last part of the tournament… So lovely, like Bette’s proud and happy speech at the TV interview too.
Now, of course, I’m coming to stand in line with all your numerous delighted readers in the waiting of the romantic evening that will follow !
Thank you, Lauren, you’re great !! ^_^
man i cant get enough of your story..love it..i hope mama bear could talk to Tina but please after the dinner..lol..Bette and Tina need some time together they have been trought to much for 3 days..ok i hope you post as soon as you can thanks :o)
I liked the chapter sweet and loving. I hope the parents come around soon. Post soon. Thanks Lauren
as always . your story is compelling and lovely . thanxs for such a wonderful storyline and pls keep the chapters coming :)
Good chapter. This is a little sigh that we see on Tina’s mother and let see how’s going. Post soon please, thanks!
Wow it would be something if Tina and Bette ended up going out to dinner and Tina’s parents were there!! that was the first thing that came to my mind after reading this chapter which was great as always… keep it up :o)
am always stick to this story and enjoy reading this..so keep posting!! :)
aww.. that’s sweet. can’t wait for your next update.
Love this story … sorry I haven’t posted sooner. Please give us the next chapter SOON!!!!! thank you for this gift!!!
Excellente
I can totally feel Bette’s pain in her leg. I’ve played soccer all my life and I’ve had four knee surgeries. It takes a lot to come back from them and the legs will never feel quite the same. But then you learn to work through the pain and you still love the sport as you did when you started as a little kid.
K
Wonderful chapter. Love this. Can’t wait for more.
just caught up. this has been fun. your accent kills me. keep on posting. golf is the game of gods.
Maybe,mom will need to talk to somebody and she goes to her sons house and it happens to be the night of the dinner..MAYBE!!!! WONDERFUL CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON THANKS