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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 204
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She’s just drifting off to sleep when she feels someone climb into the bed and lifting her arm. She opens her eyes and it’s the boys.
“Babies, what are you doing here?” She asks as she lift up her covers so the boys can snuggles close. Danny is closest to her.
“We can’t sleep mommy.” Danny says and lay on his back facing his mother.
She smiles down and leans down and kisses them each on the cheek.
“Well, you can sleep here tonight.” Tina says. She closes her eyes and lay her arm over them.
“We love you mommy.” Noah says. Tina opens her eyes again and smiles down on him.
“I love you too.” Tina replies, she closes her eyes again. So did the boys and soon they were all asleep.
The next morning, Tina wakes up and sees that she’s alone in the bed. She stretches a little before she gets out of bed. She put on some training pants and a tank top and walks into Andrea’s room. She’s not in her bed. Tina panics for a second.
“Andrea? Boys?” She calls out.
“We’re in here mommy.” Danny calls back.
Tina follows the sound and finds them all in the kitchen. She rounds the corner when Noah’s about to cut and apple. He’s standing on a chair.
“No, no. Stop.” Tina calls out. He jumps a little and the knife he’s holding makes a extra chop. He cuts himself. He starts to scream. She rushes over to him. Her tone is a little angry. “You know that you are not allowed to use knives. How many times have I said that?” Tina says and takes the knife from him. She lifts him down. She takes a piece of paper and put it around his index finger. “Go and sit down, Hold it tight.” Tina says and leans against the counter. After a few second she feels a soft tap on her back. She turns around and sees that Danny is holding a knife up to her.
“Here. I didn’t use it.” He says a little scared. She takes it away from him and turns around again, facing the wall, she wipes a few tears away. Noah keeps screaming. She finally turn towards him after a minute. She kneels down in front of him and takes his hand. She removes the paper and sees a pretty deep cut.
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1st..And WTF Tina flirting with that Josh wanker guy? WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!
I don’t even know what to say. I think what sucks so much about it is that Bette is hurt and somewhat helpless at the moment. It reminds me of a wounded soldier coming home to find his wife is either on her way out the door or already gone.
W.T.F.? OKAY DRAMA QUEEN YOURE KILLING IT HERE DO WE HAVE ANOTHER I.C. ON OUR HANDS AND NOT F*KING KNOW?YOUR LUCKY WE CANT HUNT YOU DOWN AND HANG YOU FROM A ROPE!GET YOUR NET FIX SO WE CAN FIND YA! MY GOD WOMEN YOUR KILLING US HERE! A VERY SLOWLY DEATH AT THAT.
And the drama begins. Loved the long installment this time. Can’t wait for more.
WTF was that?! Come on, Tina is more gay than Bette… why now! And she did it infront of Bette, it’s so uncool. URGH!!! Damn you better fix it..Or I will … *taking a very long deep breath*. Man, you really killing me here.
You know it was ok the accidents and illness and other stuff but this flirting thing with a men when Bette is right there blind and scared it sucks big time..i really didnt like this twist…i think this family doesnt deserve that after all they have gone through. I hope they have better and happy days ahead!.
Okay…love the story, but is it going to be changed from Crush Meeting to “kick me when I am down?” How much more can Bette take? Tina’s timing sucked big time (even though no time would have been a good time), can’t wait to see what happens next.
WTF!!!!! I can not belive you did this to them. Please fix it soon. Great Chpater
Woo girl! You must love abuse!! Ha!! Good to see the Dr. had the cocaine cream. Good job.
seriously you are killing a perfectly good story with all the stupid storylines you come out with!1 you are as bad as the other fan fic author starting with “C” and ends with ‘i’ with equally nonsensecial storylines!!! you and the other author wins hands down for the longest shitty storylines and longest chapters!!!!
By all accounts Tina is more devoted to Bette than any real straight woman turned gay that I every seen in my life time. This story is just not believable why do you think people are upset with IC. It is not just because its a GAAAY show but because it is not believable that Tina would do this on the show. LH played that devoted wife character so well that no one believes that Tina would leave Bette for a man. I sorry but this just does not sit well with me. You have a great writing ability but I think if we wanted heterosexual we would just turn on the television this you can see night and day.
Oh no, don’t you take Bette and Tina down that path of doom, not after all they’ve been thru, it is neverending and Tina shoulda controlled herself; but hey flirting is just that, anyone can do it; but it doesn’t mean you have to act on it; unless you’ve got some crazy producer person insisting that you go that way and so_gay you haven’t so enuff already with the Tina and Josh, Tina and anyman thing!!!! hear me…otherwise I’m not reading anymore….
I’m sorry so_gay, my deepest apologies, I meant to say something wonderful about your latest post and tell lauren to ‘wakeup and smell the coffee’ cause I’m not reading her story anymore if Tina does the dastardly deed on Bette; certainly not after 200 fycking chapters…please so_gay accept my apologies and pleaseeeeee lauren get the friggin’ message!!!!!
I am a bit disapointed that after all this time that a great story has to be spoilt! I am a straight women of 37 and enjoy a number of stories, purely for the love factor. I do appreciate things change but please not in this story!!!!!!!!!!! Please don’t change the ideal………
How did Bette know it was Danny’s blue car? Could she see it? And Tina did not react to that, did she hear Bette clearly, at least it did not register to Tina or to Bette. Let her get over Josh quickly, please. Great story.
totally agree!!!! I mean, come on girl, you’re not doing this to us!!! Geez, I disappear for a week and I come back to the site and I find this madness…!!! I mean WTF!!! Ok, In a more objective approach, Tina didn’t or at least doesn’t want to act on her feelings, so it’s not as bad as Tina f***ing Henry in their house, and Bette totally hit the nail when she said it was T’s subconscious telling her that, you know in S3 Tina wanted the simplicity of a ‘normal life’, and this B&T have gone through hell with all the hospital visits… BUT that’s NO EXCUSE for Tina to flirt with this dude right in front of Bette… And poor boys, they really boke my heart… Anyway, I think we’re all waiting to see how you fix this PRONTO!
I haven’t commented in ages… but WOW!! What a chapter and update. Hits VERY close to home right now. Thank you for your wonderful writing. :)
Oh dear Lauren baby, you are evil and wound up a few people, I myself was abit WTF reading it, but I have faith in your wonderful writing to sort this mess out. Look forward to another long chapter. xxxxxx
a very long long and shocking chapter i hope Tina wont’ act about her feelings! and please let Bette see soon! i hope you are a B&T fan and you will fix this!
I love your story but I am a true Tibette fan and I just can’t read this if it continues along this same line. I will continue to read your other story but I may not read this one again.
Okay, here we go. It seems that you are giving Bette a chance to let Tina know how triffling tasteless it is for her to flirt in front of her (Which really throughs back to S2 when Tina was troughing Helena all up in Bette’s face. It is as if Bette is getting the chance to say “Yes, I cheated with Candace, but I didn’t do it in you face or have her in our home alla Henry). But this is worse because Bette is so physically helpless her. Just when I thought that you were going to use Bette’s temperary blindness as a chance for B&T to have some very sensual sex (You know when you just have to feel your way around since your eyes are not available.) and you caome with this twist, so much for reading your mind. Bette is right, if the kids found out about this, it could be devastating. And it is a bunch of CRAP that Josh didn’t know about B&T’s relationship. There is NO WAY that anyone associated with her case didn’t know that they are married. This is a hospital for christ sakes and I know that the word had to spread that they were married since Tina or Julia was there most of the time and B&T ofetn kissed in front of the hospital staff (Similarly, there is NO WAY that Candace didn’t know that Bette had a gf when she was introduced to her by her ex who had just asked about Tina. The b**ch knew and did’nt care). Not to mention how unprofessional Josh was to be flirtinh with Tina in front of her child. Please continue :o(
What the hell, damn my friend can’t believe you did this to them and damn drama keep coming to them, this is sad and hope you will let them work thing out. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Girls, girls, grils, are you all goin’ insane. This is Lauren’s story, she deals with it as she pleases, and it is her choice and here choice alone where this is heading. You can all have your comments, but please stay a little polite. If you think you can do the job better, please show me. Thanks Lauren for a very long and well written chapter, I’m looking forward how the story will develop, I’m with you all the way.
WTF!!!!! That it, I’m taking the next boat to Oslo and I don’t bring cookies….