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A Christmas Carol – Porter Style Finale
Chapter 7
Christmas Day
I pulled up in front of Tina’s house. Checking the address one last time I confirmed that I was in fact in the right place. I’m not sure what compelled me to accept the invitation but in a way I was glad that I did. There was something about her. Something that I could not put my finger on that made me want to know more about this incredible woman.
I glanced at my watch. It was nearing noon. Perhaps I was early? Was I too early? Nonsense, she said to come over any time. Grabbing the items that I had brought with me from the back seat, I slowly made my way up the sidewalk. It was a small, well looked after house. Clearly someone knew a little something about gardening as the flowers and shrubs were all in excellent condition.
Arriving at the door I hesitated for a few seconds trying to gather some courage. Finally after taking a deep breath, I reached over and rang the door bell, then waited.
A short time later the door opened slowly and I was surprised to see that it was little Angelica who greeted me.
“Hi Bette. I didn’t know you were coming over. Merry Christmas.”
“Well hello there little one. Merry Christmas to you too.”
“Whatcha got in your hands?” Asked the curious little girl.
“This? Well there is something here for your Mommy and something here for you.”
In the back ground I hear Tina call out to her daughter “Angie, who was at the door?”
She is wiping her hands in a dish towel as she comes into view wearing an apron, a pair of jeans and a long sleeved white t-shirt with the sleeves pulled up above her elbows. Her hair is tied up but there a few loose strands falling across her face. She brushes them out of the way and tucks them behind her ear.
When she sees me she stops in her tracks. “Ms. Porter, uh, hello……….please, come in. Angie, move out of the way so Ms Porter can come in.”
I sense that she is as nervous as I am. “Thank you. Merry Christmas Tina, but please it’s Bette. There is no Ms Porter today.”
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(31 votes, average: 4.10 out of 5)
This chapter was well worth waiting for. How clever to leave an opening for a follow up for New Years Eve – the date. Well done Taz. I look forward to perhaps a sequel – pretty please. Love from K xxx
Tazzie, cheers to your and yours and your naughtiness through out the year. Thank you very very much for the great story, it was wonderful as always. I hope Santa brings you every litte gadget that is on your wish list. Merry Christmas, Md aka Oma
A truly wonderful Christmas story. I hope you continue to bless us with your talent. Merry Christmas!
Thanks so much for this story. Have a great holiday!
Very nice story. Happy Holidays and I hope you have a wonderful new year.
Bravo, that was a wonderful story. Merry Christmas:)
Taz, you rocked it out of the ballpark! I loved reading every chapter, and wish that there could be a sequel!!!! I know, push broud. As for being naughty, I know that P won’t use it against you! Hee Hee. Naughty is good isn’t it? Anyway, talk to you soon, and a Merry Christmas to you both. xoxo
Lovely story thank you. Merry Xmas and Happy New Year. Thank you for this wonderful story.
Wonderful chapter. Certainly hope you will find a way to continue this warm and loving story. Thanks for posting.
Thanks for this story maybe we could go on the new years date,and more.
yes yes yes, lol. Merry Christmas toyou too and happy New Year.Thanks for the wonderful tale.
Thank you for this uplifting story. I am sure Santa will be visiting you. After all, your “naughtiness” can’t be on a grand scale. ;-)
A very beautiful ending to a very beautiful story. Thank you for sharing it with us. Merry Xmas.
This beautiful story should balance out your “naughty”! Thank you for sharing! Happy Holidays!
Thanks for the happy Christmas tale. Hope you and all your loved ones have a great holiday!
Thank you for this great holiday treat Taz! Ugh! Back to the assembly line…
i hope we get to see the new year’s eve date XD Merry Christmas!!!!
Wonderful and a Merry Christmas