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    Story written on April 10, 2005 by Shakennotstirred.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=53128
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    7. God Olives…you’re such a frickin tease! You write these wonderful stories, with such great drama and killer dialogue…then you leave us for weeks on end. And, just when we come to peace with the fact that we are going to have to move on…you come back with another incredible chapter, reminding us that no matter what, moving on from your writing, just isn’t an option. Damn you!!! :) Geez…the least you could do is give us extra Olives, since you post so seldom!! Thanks!!!

    9. Sea, et al, the long layoff wasn’t planned, but I guess they never are. My hard drive also died on me a week ago. That didn’t help, lol. I promise to do better…as soon as I’m back in town. Thx for the comments.

    18. Olives, what I find most intriguing is that although you’ve really changed the identities of Bette and Tina, you haven’t changed the essence. The dialogue is very real and absolutely delightful!

      Stars to the moon and back!

    22. you tease…but i love your story, your take. :) because i happen to be an athelete…and things do happen, you know. :P alright, bring it on!!! i’m looking forward to more. by the way, i like your take on tina; she’s really got a mind of her own. leave it to her to keep bette breathless!

    25. I’ll join the chorus: I love this story, too. So light and fun and funny, so innocent but maybe not! Thanks for reviving the story; I’ve missed it. I agree with Seahurst (though I might hold up the mirror there, too, sorry) but I’ll hold out for quality every time. Another top-rate chapter. I can go to bed a very happy woman. Thank you.

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