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Story written on March 17, 2005 by Shakennotstirred.
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(95 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
Haven’t even read it and I think its wonderful. What a fab St Patricks Day present. You rock. 5 bazillion stars
How funny, I was just re-reading some early Umbrella, hit the main page button and, Yay, new stuff!
Let the catfight begin. Please post another chapter soon, you got one helluva game set for us.
Okay, back now that I’ve read it. I really love this story, I hope there is some fessing up in the next chapter. Thank you for writing it!
so much fun to read!
more please, I love this story, it’s addictive
I love this story. It’s really unique. Thanks for posting.
Great story. Please post soon.
im so happy u posted!! cant wait to see what u have planned for these 2!!
I have been reading this story from the beginning and I was just so pleased to see that you posted a new chapter! I love the story…Bette and Tina are very cute in their cat and mouse dance. Can’t wait to see what happens when the doc shows up.
POST ANOTHER SOON?……………please……………………………….i cannot wait….
You always make it worth the look to see if there is something new from you. Your stories were the first that drew me here and I keep coming back hoping for more. As always, a pleasure. Thank you.
Great, as usual.
Can’t wait to see where you take this.
I think you are doing great with this story. It has become one of my favorites and I check about every ten minutes to see if it’s up lol. Keep up the good work your an amazing writer!
awesome post…come on now though one request: a lil b and t action, maybe they go out to celebrate the scrimage…get a lil tipsy..then just happen to kiss or something..hehe
i have been waiting for your next chapter forever, thanks for finally posting, now hurry up with the next one…luv it!!!!!!!
The only thing wrong with this story is that it isn’t on here enough!
I really like this Tina. She’s sweet and naive and obviously smitten with Bette and doesn’t even recognize it yet.
The ‘taking of Bette Porter’ will be a sweet treat.
Thanks for posting another chapter!
Olives, do you always leave the women so satisfied??? LOVED this chapter. Everytime I see that you’ve posted another I get all happy!
love a story where you literally can’t wait to see what happens next. So, what happens next?
These chapters that set the tone for future ones frustrate me…because I want to read the next chapter NOW! Really like this story, thank you :-)
Yay for the new chapter! Excellent as always Olives!
Ok Olives, you made my day posting another chapter on this story. I love your stories. Keep them comming but PLEASE don’t make us wait so long. Still waiting for more of CHASE. Oh how i love the Chase……
love this story…..love their interactions….thanks for the chapter…always looking forward to more
Yippee! Another chapter of one of my favorite stories! I love your storyline and your take on the characters! As far as I’m concerned you can’t post often enough!
Great chapter. This is gonna be fun and now let the jealous began. Love about Bette and Tina feeling. Please post soon the next one, thank you!