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Story written on September 20, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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Nice Olives…I gave you 5 BIG stars. hehe.
Damn .. that was sure worth the wait. Excellent Chapter. I love this story.
Still one of my absolute favorites.
Great chapter.
Your story is always worth the wait, and it just keeps getting better if thats possible. Thanks for the update, please post soon!
This is a wonderful story.I can’t wait for your next one. I really enjoy your writing’because you can feel what your reading.
Another excellent chapter. I am glad to see them moving forward. We will be looking for the next chapter. Thanks-you.
Wonderful as always. It was a long wait, I’ll admit, but so worth it in the end. I’m anxious for another chapter…
Lovely, as always. It was so nice to see this update. While the fan in me wants as many chapters posted as possible all the time, you take all the time you need to keep up with this story. Every chapter delivers on the anticipation. :)
Wow… Just when I thought it couldn’t get better, it does.. Thanks so much for this amazing story, Olives. Love it.
Thank you, Olives for another lovely chapter.Hope that they are moving forward with no more quilt or anger.
That was so worth the wait.
Go for it Bette…say it outloud next time!!!
This chapter read like a work of foreign cinema – lots of atmosphere. I could smell the inside of that cab and see that elevator. Was it one of those interior ones that’s open with latticework framing?
Good work!
Lovely as always, and yes, it totally feels like a foreign movie, techgal.
Any plans of actually making a book out of this? This is excellent material. Thanks again and hope to read more soon.
Now I will sound like the broken record and say Olives, you’ve written another fine chapter. This one was especially beautiful.
I am so glad you are back. This is one of the first stories I started to read and I really love it. I hope you will continue!
oh that was lovely…
I love your attention to detail. I was laughing about the Russian car. My girlfriend is from Belarus and she was showing me pics of her old car.
You are good!…you are very good!…love it!
Excellent update! Thanks for sharing with us. You never disappoint.
Another great chapter! You do have an eye for details, are you a journalist or an artist by chance? Please keep us in Budapest for a while with our fav couple.