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Story written on August 18, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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I must be extremely dense, but I don’t really get this entire conversation. What is it that Bette is wanting that she can’t have in regards to Tina? Is Mom warning her not to set her sights to high in thinking that Tina is The One that she is to spend the rest of her life with?
Thanks for updating, Olives!
I must be extremely dense, but I don’t really get this entire conversation. What is it that Bette is wanting that she can’t have in regards to Tina? Is Mom warning her not to set her sights to high in thinking that Tina is The One that she is to spend the rest of her life with?
Thanks for updating, Olives!
LMAO! Oh God! If me and Wolfy have children……..I won’t mind trying to raise a little Gargy or a little Wolfy……..it’s the possibility of raising a little Bette, that has me scared shitless! 5-Stars. :D
i am so impressed how youve created relationships between all these characters. fantastic.
Brilliant! I love the foreshadowing. You must never stop this series for it was the first story that truly hooked me in.
Amazing, insightful writing. I am now hooked on this story. (And I think Bette and Tina should do it on the piano….)
Absolutely lovely!
A little mother-daughter love. Aww, thats sweet. Great work and cant wait to read more.
LOL yeah.. the best revenge indeed. You have done a very good job shaping and play the characters. I’m stuck with your series since the beginning as well. Good job and boy you ‘ve got a good imagination and you can write girl!
Looks like Bette’s mom can see the self-destruction coming from Bette. Very insightful. Will Bette be playing the piano for Tina? :-) Please continue…
I love Bette’s mom…she needs to be her therapist after S1…great characters and dialog…bravo!
I like the interaction between bette and her mother. I’t can all be so tense but thats what makes your story so real your mother love can be hard to handle sometimes. I can’t wait to see how tina and bette mother act towards one another.post soon
Is Maddy saying that Bette should be satisfied now that she has found love and not look beyond it?
Not totally clear here…
Bette’s mom is a very wise woman.Too bad that Bette cling on her dad too much. Thank you for another wonderful chpater,Olives.
I think Umbrella was the first fanfic I read (starting on the other site), so you are the one who got me hooked and I still am hooked on you to this day. You’re GREAT!
“We made out. It was a date.â€
Thanks for giving us this insightful chapter. It allows us to how bumpy the road has been for Bette regarding her childhood and parents. Can’t wait for the next chapter.