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You and Me – (Chapter: Making Amends)
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She breathed out a shuddery breath and gripped the sides of the desk. Anger, pain, and fear swept through her like a roaring current and her vision became fuzzy. Counting slowly to ebb the powerful emotions, the room became clear again. Gone were her restraints as well as her family.
Panic took over and her eyes darted all over the room in search of those who had just vanished. She stood up from her chair and turned around; no one was there. Behind her, someone cleared their throat and she whirled about to find Madison, wearing the same school standard uniform she was but instead of grey pants, there was a red and white plaid skirt. The top buttons of her blouse were undone to reveal the beginnings of a red lace bra and ample cleavage.
The room became warmer, or maybe it was just her body temperature. Either way, the tie around her neck was too confining and so she loosened it slightly and walked towards the Latina. Those hazel eyes remained locked on her as she stopped in between the open legs.”I’ve missed you so much.” she whispered, afraid that if she spoke any louder the moment would dissipate in a cloud of smoke and disappear forever.
“I’ve missed you too. More than you know.” Madison replied, wrapping an arm around her neck while grabbing onto her tie with the other hand and pulling her close.
Finally, after so many sleepless nights and days spent wondering, she was back in her arms again. They rubbed noses and a renewed sense of safety and contentment dwelled within her soul. Everything felt ok for the first time in a while. There was no danger, no urgency, no need to think ahead. It was just her and the girl she loved.
“Kiss me.” The request was simple but the emotion behind it was complex and intense.
She leaned in, lips millimeters apart when the door was violently thrown open again. Her arms held Madison close to her as her head whipped towards the intruder, only to find the one person in the world she never wanted to see.
Gun in hand, Skinny Jim stood poised without an ounce humanity in his cold beady eyes.
“Please don’t take her from me.” she wasn’t sure if it was Madison or herself who was pleading with him. He pulled the trigger…
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well, that’s a good thing that madison decided to back off…nice chapter, very well written as usual XD…everything you write, i like !!! no matter if there’s a lack of spencer or not…but i’m sure you will make up for that later…*wink*…hehe, can’t wait for part 2 =)
no complains bout the lack of spencer over here! Ash’s my fav, well the way you write her anyway :P oh and v. weird and random but i liked the description of them smoking; emotive, relevant and well written. as usual, post soon!
well, that’s a good thing that madison decided to back off…nice chapter, very well written as usual XD…everything you write, i like !!! no matter if there’s a lack of spencer or not…but i’m sure you will make up for that later…*wink*…hehe, can’t wait for part 2 =)
no complains bout the lack of spencer over here! Ash’s my fav, well the way you write her anyway :P oh and v. weird and random but i liked the description of them smoking; emotive, relevant and well written. as usual, post soon!
Hey i’ve been silent for awhile here, but I had to say this is my FAVORITE son fanfic ANYWHERE on the web…please update more soon…and PLEASE have Ash tell Spence she’s part of the SDR’s it’s not fair not too!
Hey i’ve been silent for awhile here, but I had to say this is my FAVORITE son fanfic ANYWHERE on the web…please update more soon…and PLEASE have Ash tell Spence she’s part of the SDR’s it’s not fair not too!
beautifully written, really nice descriptions and word choices. wow. just very, very nice. great skeleton
beautifully written, really nice descriptions and word choices. wow. just very, very nice. great skeleton
wtf…its like i dont check the updates on the site for two days…and all hell breaks loose!!! all of this drama going on in all these fanfics….but this….this is just insane….dano has seriously got to get back with madison ; ) and i think that will take care of all her nightmares…but as for ash and madison…that was quite a shocker, i figured madison was gonna try and make her life a living hell….but i seriously doubt that its for spencer…i think its for dano, but what ever happened to tori comming back…i want some more drama…lol
wtf…its like i dont check the updates on the site for two days…and all hell breaks loose!!! all of this drama going on in all these fanfics….but this….this is just insane….dano has seriously got to get back with madison ; ) and i think that will take care of all her nightmares…but as for ash and madison…that was quite a shocker, i figured madison was gonna try and make her life a living hell….but i seriously doubt that its for spencer…i think its for dano, but what ever happened to tori comming back…i want some more drama…lol
Nice=) Learned a lil’ more about 3 of our main characters…totally loved the terms you used in this chapter…”dumbass croonies”…priceless haha. Awesome job babe!!
Nice=) Learned a lil’ more about 3 of our main characters…totally loved the terms you used in this chapter…”dumbass croonies”…priceless haha. Awesome job babe!!
OH HELL YES! Mashley = kickass drama
OH HELL YES! Mashley = kickass drama
Impressive writing. Your characters have a depth that winds the readers heart into an emotional maelstrom.
Impressive writing. Your characters have a depth that winds the readers heart into an emotional maelstrom.