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What Happens Next – (Chapter: 45: Who’s Got Game?)
Ashley squirmed, she started speaking faster, “Well, I ate dinner at her house and her Dad’s girlfriend came over…she’s really ho…uh…I mean she got these great…I mean she’s a really nice person.” Raife laughed, “So, let me guess you were staring at her…I mean admiring her personality traits?” Ashley grinned, “Yeah something like that, anyway Spence caught me and right now I’m just trying to get out the doghouse again.”
Ashley’s face became serious, “Dad, I think something’s really wrong with me. I just can’t stop thinking about girls…sometimes I try really hard and then somebody’s walks by or I look at a girl and I just…I don’t know…I can’t think of anything else! I know Spencer gets pissed at me about it and when I see her, I try not to touch for the first like five minutes we’re together, but sometimes I can’t help it, she’s so hot…she drives me crazy!” Raife patted his daughter on the back, “Nothing’s wrong with you. Ash, I promise you, you’ll think about girls for the rest of your life.” He grinned, “Hopefully, the older you get the better you’ll be at hiding it from your current girlfriend!” Raife stood up, pulling Ashley to her feet, “Come on, your girl’s gonna be here any minute.” They headed towards the patio doors, “Ash, do me a favor, huh? Can you please keep your showers under twenty minutes? Your Mom’s driving me crazy about that one!”
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Tristan brushed her hair back again, only to have the large, stubborn curls flip back into their original position, “Damn it!” Ashley snickered, “What’s wrong dude? Does Justin Timberlake finally want his hair back?” Tristan flipped Ashley off and started rummaging through her bag. She finally pulled out a pair of baggy cargo shorts and pulled them on. Tristan reached back into her bag and grabbed a bright blue Superman t-shirt, she looked down at her ensemble, “Damn, I look fucking hot!” Ashley stood up next to Tristan in the mirror, flexing her biceps, “Hell no! This is hot right here!” Tristan roughly pushed Ashley away from the mirror and grabbed her crotch, “Wrong again biotch! This shit is hot!” Ashley was just about to swing when the doorbell rang, both girls looked at each other for a moment before running for Ashley’s door then slapping and punching their way down the stairs. Ashley tripped Tristan as they came off the bottom stair causing Tristan fell hard on top of her. Christine glared at both of them before opening the door, she yelled over the loud slapping noises, “Hi Spence!” She looked at Sammie, “I don’t believe we’ve met?” Sammie shook Christine’s hand, “I’m Samantha, Tristan’s girlfriend.” All three women turned to look at Ashley and Tristan. Tristan had pulled Ashley into a headlock while Ashley was clawing and punching at Tristan’s back. They both suddenly looked up at their girlfriends for the first time.
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I love your writing. It go from humor to drama, back to humor and then to hot and sexy, I just love it. LOL keep up the great work ; )
WOW..flippin HOT! Way to go go…and just think this is my virtual gf!Wow, just imagine if you were my true gf!!! Woot! I loveit as always and you always bring a smile and laughter to my face!
Ashley’s dad is fuckin awesome. I love him, he’s so cool. Hahaha. So I guess Spencer won the bet? Go Spence! Amazing chapter. I love it :)
hey, I love your story and with me you have definatly a german fan.. Natalie
I love your writing. It go from humor to drama, back to humor and then to hot and sexy, I just love it. LOL keep up the great work ; )
WOW..flippin HOT! Way to go go…and just think this is my virtual gf!Wow, just imagine if you were my true gf!!! Woot! I loveit as always and you always bring a smile and laughter to my face!
Ashley’s dad is fuckin awesome. I love him, he’s so cool. Hahaha. So I guess Spencer won the bet? Go Spence! Amazing chapter. I love it :)
hey, I love your story and with me you have definatly a german fan.. Natalie
HAHA WOW!! that was soo perfect..haha spence won the bet..and ashley and T are so comedy..constantly fighting..and OMG falling down the stairs..well kinda..but yea that is comedy
HAHA WOW!! that was soo perfect..haha spence won the bet..and ashley and T are so comedy..constantly fighting..and OMG falling down the stairs..well kinda..but yea that is comedy
GOSH DAMN!! Who would be dry after reading that?!? I know I’m not…muahaha…omg, too fucking HOTT! So agree with alice, you have a gift love;)
GOSH DAMN!! Who would be dry after reading that?!? I know I’m not…muahaha…omg, too fucking HOTT! So agree with alice, you have a gift love;)
lol…that was sooooo gooood. I am still laughing. This is a GREAT Story…I love your writing!
lol…that was sooooo gooood. I am still laughing. This is a GREAT Story…I love your writing!
Girl, you are da bomb! This was so HOT! I love this story and your fantastic writing. Please post again soon.
Girl, you are da bomb! This was so HOT! I love this story and your fantastic writing. Please post again soon.
I must shamefully say that I have been following your creativity for months and i never comment. But i want you to know that i thank you for getting me through my long overnight shift. You are my hero. Dont expect comments from me often, but do know that you are the best in my book. Keep up the good work, or at least continue tokeep me up at work. Thanks
I must shamefully say that I have been following your creativity for months and i never comment. But i want you to know that i thank you for getting me through my long overnight shift. You are my hero. Dont expect comments from me often, but do know that you are the best in my book. Keep up the good work, or at least continue tokeep me up at work. Thanks
holy shit…that was so hott! Finally! i mean…umm…yea…lol…w/e! That was some kinda hott!! dude i love how u put so much comedy in this tho! Im a sucker for it…lol post more soon!
holy shit…that was so hott! Finally! i mean…umm…yea…lol…w/e! That was some kinda hott!! dude i love how u put so much comedy in this tho! Im a sucker for it…lol post more soon!