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Marshall Daniel's Boarding School For Girls – (Chapter: Chapter 33 The Way We Were)
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I lay in my bed staring at the ceiling with a smile on my face. My alarm went off a few minutes ago but I was too busy basking in last night’s events to start my day just yet.
It was perfect- no, more than perfect!
It was everything I thought it would be and more. Do you have any idea how many hours I’ve logged thinking about this girl? Fantasized about her?!
I rolled over in my bed and shrieked into my pillow as I remembered the kiss…and what a kiss it was. Her lips were so soft on mine. At the memory I pressed my fingertips to my mouth and smiled again.
She was so sweet to me. She ignored the fact that I blushed furiously after she told me I was beautiful. She was so patient with me. She quickly removed her hands from my breasts when I told her I wasn’t ready. So was so romantic. She picked that flower for me and walked me to my front door after our date.
Carmen.
I smiled at the thought of her name.
My alarm went off again and I fought the urge to snooze it, I really did need to get up for school. After all, Carmen would be there. One lazy arm whipped around to make contact with the radio, shutting it up immediately.
Carmen.
No one will ever be as beautiful as Carmen. I’ll never feel this strongly about someone else again.
Carmen.
Spencer: “Dad?” I was knocked out of my daydream when I finally noticed my father standing at the base of my bed. The room was dark, I hadn’t seen him right away, but there he stood arms at his side, an indiscernible expression on his face. “Daddy, how long have you been standing…”
My whole head snapped around as he backhanded me, making me fall onto my bed. Before I could even recover, though, his hands were at the collar of my shirt and I was ripped out from my covers and thrown to the floor.
I slid a few feet until my shoulder hit my dresser and that’s when I noticed; it was empty. Its hollow rattle confused me for a moment until I was unceremoniously pulled up from the floor by the scruff of my neck and tossed against my bedroom door head first.
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Holy shit that was crazy. I’ve been waiting to hear about Spencer’s past but I had no idea it was THAT brutal. And then she met Ashley and she the pieces back together. So sweet!
What the shit? You made me cry! I just woke up and now I’m going to be sad all day! That was one of the SADDEST things I ever read. I had trouble finishing it, I kept getting up to get a tissue cause I could see *Insert Sad Face* That was upsetting… but totally worth it! They all better kick Ohio’s fucking ass! Loved the update PMS! Real soon… I need a happy chapter, I think you know what I mean… ;)
okay, i teared up, a bit [sike, alot!] that’s my worst fear if people found out i was gay. but most of my peers know im gay but they don’t care, and i go to a catholic school? hmmmm but this chapter got me soo angry too, if i went to king high id kick all of their straight asses! and this chapter made me love ashley a billion times more than before which i thought couldn’t happen hahaha! im glad spencer has her
i actually had to walk away from my computer before I cried. that was horrible, hell i wanna whop some ass for Spence. You have crafted a insightful, and sensitive chapter even with the crappiness that occurred. Thankfully, Ashely and Spence’s new family will make it better and maybe even kick some ass in the process. PMS, prettyboi
okay so.. i read this last night and literally had no words to say for how amazing this chapter was. so…i thought i would sleep on it and maybe today i would have some awesome comment i could leave. but really, im still speachless. this was SO amazing, like really. SOOOO many emotions!! amazingly awesome, there arent any other words! PMS!!!
OMFG i’m balling my eyes out here stix. that was so brutal. just.. wow. i can’t even imagine what that had to have been like. personally i wanted to slap ash for her suggestion although the thought of gage doing some serious ass kicking is awesome. and then all those bastards and bitches could see how well spence is doing now and how happy she is and not to mention it’d be great if they all got a glimpse at one of the private jets. yea jaws hitting the floor you mofos. excellent update even though like i said i’m sitting here balling! pms soon, whichever story you feel like posting!
ok that was a very moving update. there were tears.hahaha but yeah great update man i would love for spencer to go back and shove the woman shes become back in all those mofos faces and of course gage beating the living shit out of some ppl would be awesome too…haha i really wanna see wat happens next. is spencer gonna go? is she not? will gage beat asses and have heads rolling? haha i hope most def!=] post more like soon soon.0_o
holy shit i got first comment. lol never thought that would happen, guess it’s a good thing i didn’t go to bed =)
ok I sitting here ready to beat the shit out of everyone who hurt Spencer. But thank you this chapter was needed. Now I need one that makes me have to take a long cold shower. Bring on Ashley and Spence , strap -ons, dildos oh my!!!!!
k soooo i’m glad i didn’t comment what i originally wanted to before i read your story cause then i’d feel like an ass…but babe that was so deep…no wonder you wanted to get it out..poor spencer never saw it coming, i blame you friends dad for yelling at you on the phone and the guy that was riding your ass…they caused it! oh and thanks for my subtle (i hate that silent b) shout out :)
okay so like ive said to many ppl i dont cry and i dont show emotion but im women enough to admit that i fucking cried i thought i could get through it but i was almost through her recalling and all hell broke lose i just got the tears to stop,so not cool dude lol now i have to say that if this happened to either of my freinds or just anyone i would personly have them wacked in fact id do it myself mybe with a bat? crowbar? hmm a .22 revolver,sawd off shot gun,automatic pistol,machine gun,gernade? ive got it all and ill take them out one at a time if you want lol but man i have to say im glad spencer told ashley its hard to open up to someone especialy something like that so im glad she did :) please pms cant wait for the crazy sex to begin….oh and warning dont ever make me cry like that again or i will hunt you down and hurt you,comprenda? lol pms please :)
That was deep and the first part really depressed me. Yes, I cried! Poor, poor Spencer. I just want to give her a big hug! I’m torn. Firstly I’m glad Spencer got all that out. It’s important for Ash to know everything so she can help Spencer heal. I would love to see those bastards get some payback. Spencer and her posse returning for revenge would be sweet but I can see how that would be difficult for her. Ash’s idea of emancipation sounds excellent she’s well shot of them and they can’t cause her any more trouble. I’m assuming her friends would cover her school fees. OK, practicalities aside…bring on the sex!
damn. im crying, and i never cry because if something i read. your such a good writer. oh yahh, and update soon please :)
i haven’t cried since…well, a long time. the ending was beautifully written. spencer is so strong to be able to come out of that whole. of course, with loving friends to mend you… wow that was an amazing update. i’d sure love to see spencer gage, kelly, ashley etc go back to kick ass!(rugby game brawl times a million) damn you kevin james… grr now im mad.
Well I decided to read it even though you told me not to and even though it was depressing it was beautifully written and the end made it all better. Kinda. =]
oh my god, that was so brutal. i saw the summary and i was like, “well, i’m gonna start crying reading this.”my god, I AGREE WITH EVERYONE ELSE!!!! SPENCER MUST TAKE A PRIVATE JET TO OHIO AND HAVE GAGE, KELLY, SARA, AND ASHLEY BEAT PEOPLE TO A BLOODY PULP!!!! ESPECIALLY KEVIN JENKINS?I’m not even sure if i’m writing the names right i’m so mad right now…Ashley’s gonna fuck yo shit up if you mess with Spencer. Well…as are the “Foxy Five” of Marshall Daniels =)YES write a chapter where they have a massacre in the King High of Ohio caused by 5 very angry girls!!!!oh my god. PMS PMS PMS!!!
I spent 10 minutes perfecting my makeup, just to have it ruined :( totally worth it! I want to see Gage kick ohio’s ass too. PmS, P’s & T’s!!!
OH MY FUCKING SHIT…!YOU MAID ME CRIED IN THIS CHAPTER..!!I LOVE this chapter..!I really like to see more spencer drama..YOUR FUCKING THE BEST..!This story is beyond..!pms
everything SoNFANFOREVER wrote is what i was thinking, crying for half of the story…i just can’t believe what happened and how heartless that whole town was from the police to the school to her own family…and i would love love love to see gage and ashley and all of them kicking all their asses…let’s just get a ring and throw them in one/two/three at a time see how they like it oh and i would die to see some ashley/kevin time…think he would be castrated…yeah me too pms
I probably picked a bad time to read this. -_- But it was quite informative and important at the same time. Although it was really pretty damn awful, it seems necessary to know and I’m glad we got to see into Spencer’s past.
Beautiful…I would love to see Gage kick the sh*t out of a lot of sorry bastards.