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I’ll Keep Holding On – (Chapter: Chapter 1 : Sixteen)
"Is this line even moving?" whined Glen to nobody in particular.
"God Glen shut up! You’ve done nothing but complain this whole trip!" snapped a testy Spencer.
"Spencer do not use the Lord’s name in vein!" said Paula sternly, instantly recieving eye rolls from her three kids.
The Carlins had been waiting in a line that seemed endless to get onboard the cruise ship that would be their home for the next eight days. The kids were out on Thanksgiving break and Arthur had booked the vacation as a way to get away from all of their stress and just relax in the Carribean sun. The ship would travel to the Southern Carribean from Ft. Lauderdale, Florida and then loop back around ending back up in Florida. Glen and Clay couldn’t wait to scope around for hot girls and party it up on the pool deck. Spencer however, was not too excited at the prospect of spending eight whole days wandering around a boat full of old people by herself, and on top of everything she was forced to share a room with her brothers.
Spencer looked around at the different buildings and thousands of people waiting to board. While looking into one of the windows in the second story of the building next to them she saw another line. For a few moments she couldn’t figure out what those people were waiting for until realization finally struck. That is the same line we’re in! You’ve got to be kidding me! The blonde sighed loudly, trying to accept the fact that she would be waiting for hours. What a great start..
Another hour and a half passed by and the Carlins were finally at the entrance of the two-story building, still not having moved very far. Spencer had never seen this many different types of people in once place, well except for on t.v. Although, coming from a small town in Ohio, she didn’t see too much diversity.
Apparently Glen had noticed all of the different people too, since he suddenly spoke to Spencer in a quiet voice after having stared in astonishment for a few minutes, "Woah Spence did you see that guy..," he pointed discreetly at a tall teenage black boy, "he’s wearing baby converse as a necklace! What a freakin weirdo!" Spencer glared at Glen and then glanced at the guy her brother was talking about.
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i can only hope that they get into some trouble… :D
i can only hope that they get into some trouble… :D
Okay…I so went on a cruise much like this one and it was awesome. The lines weren’t as bad as here, but it was tolerable and it was in Fl. too. I had the awesomest time. I didn’t however, meet Spencer or Ashley, but then again I’m glad I didn’t meet Glen as well. Lol…Cheers mate.
Okay…I so went on a cruise much like this one and it was awesome. The lines weren’t as bad as here, but it was tolerable and it was in Fl. too. I had the awesomest time. I didn’t however, meet Spencer or Ashley, but then again I’m glad I didn’t meet Glen as well. Lol…Cheers mate.
i have never been on a cruise, but this story deff makes me want to go on one!!!lol i love how descriptive you are which i think is a great quality to have so people understand the story better :) i cant wait to see how she meets ashley when she comes into the story and what happens…. GREAT JOB!!! PMS
i have never been on a cruise, but this story deff makes me want to go on one!!!lol i love how descriptive you are which i think is a great quality to have so people understand the story better :) i cant wait to see how she meets ashley when she comes into the story and what happens…. GREAT JOB!!! PMS