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Greenwich – (Chapter: Everyone Lies)
Chapter 12- Everyone Lies
There are moments in life so significantly unlike any others—Rare and often times life altering points in our existence in which we can feel our racing blood halt, sense the unforgiving and unrelentless hands of time approach an indescribable sort of standstill, sucking out the life we didn’t know we depended on—You can’t breathe, but you’re not even aware of this inherent fact. See, you’re stuck on empty because right then, in those seconds in which you can feel every single thing you’ve grown accustomed to changing, something snaps deep within the core of your being, rendering you a numbed super human, ethereal version of your former self—The whole process is terribly frightening.
The night before wasn’t of those moments—Not to say it wasn’t terribly intense, because it was—It really, really was. Alas, Ashley hadn’t spent the night with Spencer (a sleepover which might’ve qualified the girls for aforementioned moment), a fact proving only surprising to Kate, who had, of course, witnessed the entire erotic event that was the two girls on the dance floor. Now, be sure, Kate wasn’t the only one to take notice. As a matter of fact, it was Donny, dear Donald, mouth agape and eyes wide, who absent mindedly doused the entirety of his favorite white t-shirt with a fourteen hundred dollar handle of rum while distractedly drinking in the sexual enigma taking place before his very eyes. There was something about them—Something in the way they moved, in the way their bodies melded into one another, rendering it near impossible to tell where one ended and one began—It was breathtakingly beautiful. Alas, the intensity of the moment, and of the next three songs, proved too taxing for both girls, thus sending them on their separate ways to their separate beds. It’s important to remember, however, that more than one heart had stopped beating in those slow burning minutes. As a matter of fact, had someone, for one reason or another, pressed a sthethoscope against their gridlocked chests they would have found that each rose and fell in sync with one another to neither of their knowledge. As Ashley lay, sprawled haphazardly across the oleander valley of her bed, she allowed herself to bask in the pleasant exhaustion precipitated from the night before, though she couldn’t help the irritating nagging feeling picking at the edges of her happiness, silently nudging her towards the point of frustration.
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Let’s chat because I love you. I haven’t read yet though. Back to comment again in a second. I literally said, “Yes!” out loud when I saw you had posted. Back in a sec…
Let’s chat because I love you. I haven’t read yet though. Back to comment again in a second. I literally said, “Yes!” out loud when I saw you had posted. Back in a sec…
You’re such a fucking badass. Alright, this chapter was amazing. I’ve decided that a part of this story that I really like is the role of the narrator. It’s totally not your typical descriptive narrator. It almost feels like you’re being told the story by someone and it’s a really neat perspective. I would think that it gives you incredible creativity as well in how you choose to say things or the details you choose to comment on. I was almost confused at the end, but recovered and “ooh-ed and ahh-ed” in horror at what Madison’s placement in this story could mean. Wonderful update as usual. You’re the best.
You’re such a fucking badass. Alright, this chapter was amazing. I’ve decided that a part of this story that I really like is the role of the narrator. It’s totally not your typical descriptive narrator. It almost feels like you’re being told the story by someone and it’s a really neat perspective. I would think that it gives you incredible creativity as well in how you choose to say things or the details you choose to comment on. I was almost confused at the end, but recovered and “ooh-ed and ahh-ed” in horror at what Madison’s placement in this story could mean. Wonderful update as usual. You’re the best.
i’m so interested in this story, love beyond anything right now, post soon i want to find out what happens at the ‘sleep over’ pms
i’m so interested in this story, love beyond anything right now, post soon i want to find out what happens at the ‘sleep over’ pms
Favorite line from Kate to Ashley: As the next six words tumbled past and out Kate’s lips, she felt that sadness come full circle, “It’s not you I’m worried about.” – Those 6 words are like a foreshadowing of disaster or drama that draweth nigh. I find your story intriguing and imaginative. Well done! PMS
Favorite line from Kate to Ashley: As the next six words tumbled past and out Kate’s lips, she felt that sadness come full circle, “It’s not you I’m worried about.” – Those 6 words are like a foreshadowing of disaster or drama that draweth nigh. I find your story intriguing and imaginative. Well done! PMS
and sorry about the repetition of the word breathe/breath…
and sorry about the repetition of the word breathe/breath…
goaskalice–haha, DUDE, i wish i was up when you commeneted! i turned in around 230ish and i guess i missed you. thanks for the always stellar comments–they make a kid feel good. and in terms of the narrator thing–i actually sortve love being able to tell the story like that. it definitely lets me sorta excavate the complicated emotions that spencer/ashley ect might not wear on their sleeve so that’s fun. dawniekey-i’ll deff try to post as soon as possible–hopefully tonight? probs before the end of the weekend. thanks for reading! :)dallas111-THANK YOU!
goaskalice–haha, DUDE, i wish i was up when you commeneted! i turned in around 230ish and i guess i missed you. thanks for the always stellar comments–they make a kid feel good. and in terms of the narrator thing–i actually sortve love being able to tell the story like that. it definitely lets me sorta excavate the complicated emotions that spencer/ashley ect might not wear on their sleeve so that’s fun. dawniekey-i’ll deff try to post as soon as possible–hopefully tonight? probs before the end of the weekend. thanks for reading! :)dallas111-THANK YOU!