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Laws of attraction Chapter 8
– Hi my name is Dr Shuster, I’ve talked to her before –he said pointing his head to the brunette-. We’ve done some studies and I got the results.
– Is she okay? – Blurted Carmen-
– Well “okay” isn’t the best word right now… but we believe she will be. We cleaned her system of any drug and her body just needs a little bit more of time. Then she would hopefuly wake up. She has suffered some serious damage though, so she would be very weak.
– Oh, okay… – Carmen was still petrified, no emotion coming from her-
– Anyway I came in here to tell you that visiting hours are about to end, so you may want to leave the room in a little – the doctor was as gentle as he could but anyway it caused Carmen to snap-
– What!?
– Excuse me?
– Can’t we stay here? I mean, what if she wakes up? She’d be all alone
– Well m’am, oficially neither of you are familiar related to the pacient so it’s not allowed for you to stay.
– But she doesn’t have anyone! That’s not fair! – Said Carmen more higher than intended- I mean – She tried to slow down a bit-
– I’m sorry m’am, but you have to go. You can comeback tomorrow at first hour.
– It’s okay, thank you very much doctor – Said a reasurring Alice while looking at Carmen- is his job Carmen. Besides we’ll be here tomorrow early. Don’t worry.
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Two hours had passed since they left the hospital. Carmen was already in her bed looking and the sealing and thinking. ‘What if Alice was right and Shane had done all that for her? What if she wakes up to a lonely room all filled with strange machines?’ Carmen remembered that feeling, that being-alone-feeling with no one caring about you. …But I do care about her… we are… we were friends… ‘oh fuck it’ and with that she got up from the bed and left.
It was ten o’clock and she was outisde the hospital trying to sneak in. It can’t be too difficult, she thought. She had done it worst in the past, so this should be easy. Once inside she went to where Shane was. Making sure there was nobody on the corridor she run to the door and checked if there was someone inside. Clear. She then turned the doorknob and made her way next to her friend’s side. Shane was still so pale and looked so calm it was scary. She sat in the chair next to the bed and put a hand in Shane’s cheek, caressing it slowly


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