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    as long as your mine ch.21

    Carmen rest her head on the headboard of the bed and take a drink from her water bottle. Shane takes a deep breath and closes her eyes.

    Carmen: babe talk to me (rubbing her shoulders)

    Shane: where do we begin? Like if we

    Carmen: (interrupting) when we

    Shane: your right..when we find her how do we ask her to sign away her rights to shay. Do we just walk up and say “hey sign these papers we want your baby”

    Carmen: babe, you have got to think positive, its going to happen. We just gotta think where to find her. Lets start from ground zero (grabbing her Macbook)

    Carmen goes to her Facebook page and types in carla’s name in search.

    Shane: um babe, Facebook? Seriously

    Carmen: well yea, almost everybody has one

    Shane: I don’t

    Carmen: I know, babe, you need to keep up with the times

    Shane rolls her eyes and waits to see if Carmen finds anything.

    Carmen: ah ha!!

    Shane jumps up and looks at the computer screen.

    Shane: damn she looks bad

    Carmen: I know, ill send her a  friend request

    Shane: wait can u see her profile

    Carmen: hold on lets see…..yea we can look….oh my god

    Shane: wow

    They see pictures of Carla shooting up.

    Carmen: well asking her to sign over her rights just got easier.

    Shane: well yes and no

    Carmen: what do you mean?

    Shane:  well we have got to be diplomatic in this, we don’t know what state of mind she’s in.

    They continue talking until they hear a knock on the door.

    Shane: come in

    Shay comes into the room and sits on the foot of the bed

    Shay: whats for dinner?

    Carmen: good question, shane whats for dinner

    Shane: I don’t cook, Carmen whats for dinner

    Carmen: don’t feel like cooking, shay what you want to eat?

    Shay: ummm five guys?

    Carmen: works for me, what about you babe?

    Shane: works for me, shay come ride with me, Carmen you keep working on that.

     

    Shane and shay leave and Carmen sends Carla the friend request and a message

           Hi Carla, this is Carmen, we met before I married Gabe’s daughter shane. Well to make a long story short we (shane and myself) have custody of shane. We would like to adopt him. We need your consent and for you to sign him over. We have had him for a little over three months now and he’s a wonderful little boy, he’s excelling in school and is on the honor roll along with being on the basketball team. Please feel free to contact me on here or call me my number is 323-555-8765. Hope to hear from you soon.

           ~carmen

     

    Carmen: I hope this works

    Keep going?

    Comments

    1. Yes please, keep going. This side of Shane w/Shay (with Carmen in the mix)…is the real Shane. Finally she has someone to love and be loved by…unconditionally. It gave everyone the chance to see the softer side of the love and leave ’em Lothario Chaiken portrayed her as.

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