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The Greatest Love Story Ever Told
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“Tina” Bette called out again to what was becoming painfully obvious an empty house, She checked every room by the time she reached the kitchen she was climbing the walls.
Her attention was drawn towards what looked like a note.
Hope you can read this from your position on the ceiling, you can get down now I’ve just popped out, Al is with me so no need to worry. I’ll explain all when I get back.
Tina xxxx
Bette hardly had time to digest Tina’s note when she heard the front door open.
“Hi…give me a minute I’m bursting” Tina ran straight to the bathroom.
Tina was followed in by Al.
“Where have you been”
“Your guess is as good as mine….as soon as I arrived she dragged me back out to my car and told me to drive…..”
“She got in your car”
“Yeah I know I was expecting her to flip any second but she seemed….well she seemed ok….she had me drive her around but she wouldn’t tell me anything, she said she wanted to talk to you first”
“Al I asked you to sit with her while I went out to lunch not take her on a jolly”
“Listen Bette…I know you want to wrap her in cotton wool….but she’s not as fragile as you think she is…..?”
“I don’t need you to tell me what Tina is thank you very much”
“I’m only saying….jeez why are you getting so mad”
“I’m not mad”
“Well you need to tell your face your not mad……”
“Can I not leave you two alone for two minutes without World War III breaking out” Tina said as she joined them.
“Never mind that….where have you been…..if you had told me you wanted to go somewhere I would have taken you”
Tina kissed Bette on the cheek. “I’m sorry I didn’t mean to worry you and I didn’t know I wanted to go somewhere until I needed to go somewhere” Tina turned to Al.
“Al I need to talk to Bette alone…can you give us a minute”
“Yeah sure…I need to get going anyway….call me ok” Al hugged Tina then turned to Bette. “You want a hug too because honestly you look like you need a hug”
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All right, all right already. I’ll post. Thanks for this. It was awesome. I’m glad Tina went to Cambridge with Bette and I love that you addressed the fact that Bette had also lost a big part of her life. However, my favorite part of the chapter was imagining Helena waking up as Tina tastes the chocolate and having to suffer through it. And I don’t even know why because I normally like Helena, but I guess it’s because she’s been too gung-ho (emphasis on the ho) about going after Bette. Like usual, great chapter. Post very, very, very, very, very soon
That’s my girl! Well done Tina. :o)
Way to go Tina. Don’t let Helena stop you from dipping into the chocolate.
nice update
Well done Skimmy…you navigated around that bump in the road very well. LMAO about Helena’s snoring and Tina’s comment about shaving her eyebrows! Can’t wait until you post again!
Excellent! can’t wait for next chapter:) PPS
It’s great to see you writing again, skimmer – and I join the readers hoping you’ll post the older chapters of this story sometime. A story this lovely is meant to be enjoyed over and over again. :-) I adore your feisty Tina and sweet Bette. Thank you!
Brilliant update. Way to go Tina! Love this story! Thank you and hope you’re feeling better Skimmer!
Take that Helenah!! I am soooo happy TK decided to go to Cambridge to be with Bette! Woohoo…gimme more skimmer! Thanks loved it :)
That was wonderful and glad Tina is go with Bette and happy for them. Helena better not do anything stupid or Tina gonna kick her ass lol. Please post more, thanks!