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Before I fall in love (6.75/10) – a Bette and Helena story
Bette did not flinch. In large steps, she strode forward and blocked the space between Tina and the entrance. The confident alpha-female looked straight Tina in the eyes and challenged. "That’s it? Are you going to escape and shut me out each time things wouldn’t run smoothly?”
Suddenly, there was electricity in the air as everyone in the room buckled their shoulders in anticipation as to how Tina would react.
Tina’s face turned a deep crimson, embarrassed that Bette had bared her soul in two sentences. Immediately, her defense mechanism came up with a vengeance as she lashed out mercilessly, “Thank you for laying your self-righteousness in complete denial of what caused all these problems in the first place. Whose fault was it, Bette? You were the one who had to get real about our finances, splurging on things we couldn’t afford, at the expense of Angelica and our family.”
Her ex-wife’s insulting statements stung. Bette trembled in her futile attempt to maintain a calm and collected demeanor. Her face glowering with rage, she spoke slowly, enunciating every single word, “It’s not the money, T. It is how you feel. You’re too scared to look the world in the eye… and let yourself out of the little comfort zone you are in. Lose someone you can depend on and you are running to another person without a fight.”
Needless to say, Tina was livid. It was one thing for her to feel contrite over her own actions, but having Bette to state it obviously in front of everyone was another matter altogether.
Seething with blind fury, she replied, "I can’t believe you just said that."
Bette could not be bothered anymore. "Fuck it.” She spat. “But you know what, Tina? I speak only the truth. If the truth hurts, hiding in a shell for your entire life would probably hurt more.”
Nelle raised her voice above the cacophony and reprimanded, “Look, give it up, folks. I didn’t come here to resolve your petty arguments. If you want to quarrel, go out or something.”
Voice up a higher octave, the blonde threatened, “Or I am going to charge you guys triple my rates for my entire time wasted here, under conflict resolution.”
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(26 votes, average: 3.58 out of 5)
nice! loved it1 although you could have more violence towards Tina!!:)
Helena and Bette are fun together! I vote yes!
yes, yes, yes, yes, yes!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love it Reb! They are so cute together. i think you should carry on writing it the way you intended. It’ll make it that much more passionate when it finally happens. Great writing!
Hey rebelzz…it gets better evry time! Loved the banter between them…can wait to read what you have in store for us next! Thanks!
If you think Bette and Helena should have sex now, please drop a “Yes” onto the comment box. Otherwise, I’ll follow my original plan – as the story is “Before I fall in love”…………………NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO …………NOT NOW!!
Not yet – but soon – I like the flirtation and they’re still getting to know each other – so please, not yet (but soon). Keep up the great writing!
Not yet.
NO———-NO———-NO
Not yet. A bit more verbal foreplay, and getting to know each other. We don’t want it to be rebound. But they are cute together, and kinda make you laugh. Tina, has just become so annoying.
No, not yet.
No, not yet.
GOOD GOOD 1 R GOOD JOB
beautiful i love the way helena makes bette feel its about time bette smiles again
I like the teasing between the two of them. It’s so sweet. They have a friendly vibe going now. I think they should wait just a bit longer before they have sex. I love a good build-up to a hot sexual encounter. I like it when the sexual tension and the mental and visual foreplay is at their highest peaks. It makes the lovemaking so frickin paasionate
No No No Get TiBette back together
What happened to the rest of this story?