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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 54
Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 54
Previously
There is a time in all our lives when we need to face our pastthis, Faye Buckley is your time.
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Bette, Tina, Shane and Alice were still staring incredulously at Kelly. Although Bette was stunned, the others were still digesting the fact of
Shane, in particular, was seething. Payback’s a *****,
“You may begin your examination, counsel.”
“Professor Barrett, are you okay?”
“Yes.”
“A little nervous?”
“Yes.”
“If anytime during the questioning, you feel you need to take a break, just let the Court and me know, okay?”
“I will.”
“Professor Barrett – may I call you Kelly?
“Yes, of course.”
“Where do you live, Kelly?”
“
Stan stood. “Your Honor, I’m sorry. Do you think it would be possible to have a brief recess so I could once again confer with my client?”
“Mr. Peakes, we just had a recess and you had time to confer with your client then. Wasn’t this witness’s name provided to you?” The Court asked.
“Yes, your Honor, but”
“Then being the excellent attorney you are, I’m sure you had ample time to discuss anything pertaining to this witness with your client. No recess. Ms. Richardson, continue.”
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(30 votes, average: 4.40 out of 5)
You are awesome! Seriously…IC needs to see this story because it would make a great storyline for the show! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
FINALLY! please post soon…please?
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOLY SMOKES BATMAN!!!!!!!! did not see that coming post now!!!!!!!!!!!
The ethnic background didn’t enter my mind. I though that Bette might have know her in the past. Never the high and mighty Faye, I see why Faye hated Bette .lost love. Sad. Love the DA Smart ladie. Now lets get to Ms Peabody. hanks for a wonderful chapter
Hahaha loved that last part, rc! Awesome twist!!!! Wow, I am totally blown away!! Thanks for posting so early for us! You rock!!!
OMG..what a twist! Damn I love this drama…RC, really lovin’ your story. Please by all means continue. ;-)
I knew faye was a lesbian!!! damm I think I know where this is going now, seat belts on lets just hope the air bag is working today.
Sitting at my pc sucking a lollie and screaming *yes yes yes yes!!!!!!! This is one awesome fanfic!!!!!!!!
well i’m with the others… love this story.. and please give your partner a big kiss for us to get you to post this chapter…
BEAUTIFUL… FUCKING … BEAUTIFUL
I knew it! please post soon..I love your story.
Brilliant! Keep it coming.
My, my, my! I thought this was Faye’s problem.I was also a Perry Mason fan…just couldn’t get enough of him. I was crushed when I found out most attorneys were nothing like him. Great story! Please post ASAP!
WOW!!!! I agree deffently award winning!!! Please continue soon..I LOVE IT
golly u deserve an award! for the most highly dramatic suspense story in the whole entire fan fic – oh pls pls post the next chapter – quick – tks
:D:D:D – r u by any chance a lawyer? :D
OMG Arceextl this is BRILLANT and I agree, you deserve an award. You had me searching so hard for Kelly’s connection, that the look a like never accured to me, and the idea of someone’s hate is to through off the scent from themselves. Absolutly BRILLIANT. I am not worthy, but please continue and post again soon.
OMG…OMFG…I’d love to be inside your head…SUPERB!! 5 Stars, again, is just not sufficient for your talent.
I probably shouldn’t say this, but I just have to: If any of the judges for the past Fan Fic Awards are reading this tale, can’t someone put in for an ‘This One Got Past Us – and Shouldn’t Have’ award???? Hurry, hurry, arcee, get the rest of the truth out…amazing, fucking amazing..
Oh my goodness that was incredibly brilliant. I mean wow. I knew Kelly had to have been with Faye but that she and Bette were almost identical…wow!
Oh yeah, has anybody figured out a way we can give this story 10 stars!! :)
come on…we know you have the next chapter ready….ok…you want begging….pleeeeeaase….
OMG hurry with the next chapter……hurry hurry hurry
Arceextl…You really played, toyed and I suspect will continue to toy with your readers will power *evil smile* THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! Truthfully I was half right in that I figured about the Kelly/Fay connection as in Faye Buckley is a hasbian LOL. But for the life of me it never at all crosses my mind that you would make Kelly Barrett a Bette Porter look-alike, for this alone I say “WOW”! Also in my humblest opinion you balance the whole story line wonderfully. You use Alice to tone down, balance the high tension, air of anticipation with witty, funny lines which is so true and characteristic to Alice’s character! You tease, you tickle, you give a little, and you throw in a sneak peak here and there and prolong the air of anticipation and purposely I dare say stretch the tension all the while moving methodically towards the cliffhanger… a brilliant move in my humblest opinion!
I enjoyed both of the recent post immensely! If I have any complaint it would be this chapter is too darn short to satisfy your readers’ addiction! Come…come… now Ms Arceextl… have a heart ;o) give us more *nudge-nudge * come on girl … what do you say … we have a deal here hmmm… *wink-wink * make the next chapter L_O_N_G_E_R
One more thing your courtroom dramas are totally worthy of an episode on The Practice! EXCELLENT job!
THANK YOU for sharing! NOW then lets ((((((( GET IT ON ))))))
Arce,
Have just caught up with this fantastic and fabulous fan fiction. It is a wonderful rollercoaster ride as all the separate threads have come together and created a magic carpet. The jury and court’s shock only mirror’s my own as the truth about Kelly’s appearance was revealed. Her previous history with Faye is a revelation that makes sense as to her hatred for Bette. Love can so easily be flipped 180 and turn into the most despicable revulsion. These emotions are yin and yang; opposites that co-exist.
You have crafted a brilliant and most enjoyable story. These court room scenes are full of high drama and the ultimate of paybacks.
Can’t wait to see what happens next.
I will be checking in constantly.
Much gratitude for sharing your genius with me.
Your Loyal Fan.
All I can say is “Holy Fucking Crap…”.
Erm, can your partner slap up on the head again so we can get another chapter soon – he he he
My goodness ! What a thrilling masterpiece !!
I always thought that Bette was involved with Faye and Kelly’s past, but never I thought Kelly would be a “mirror image” of her ! Marvellous idea !
And your Nancy is simply the full-of-genius and engaging lawyer everybody would dream to meet. What a character…
Now I just look at you with the same admirative glance that Della Street had for Perry Mason : WOW !!!
Even if I wasn’t able to comment the two last chapters – you wrote these last three SO fast, amazing !! – , please accept my reunited thanks and congratulations for this so exciting trial movie, written with huge talent !
As Alice said : “Holy Fuck…Fuck me…is someone making a movie of this?”
… that would be a great idea indeed !
What a story… Thanks again !!
P.S.: Here I cannot help but imagining, since the wonderful Helen Shaver played Faye in the show, that it would have been delightful to see the tape of Desert Hearts in Bette’s hands during the famous TV debate ! Memory of the past too, no ? (lol)
OMG!! excelleny. i knew that she had to be an ex lover. but the ethnic background. didnt see that coming. loved the perry mason moment. hugh fan. how do i bg, let me count the ways. please another one today. thanks
K
Well that was wonderful. Love it. Can’t wait for more.
RCCCCCCCCCCCCC!!! Damn Girl….you got my spider senses tingling! This chapter was 1 in a 1,ooo,ooo! P-R-I-C-E-L-E-S-S!
Please post again soon. You probably have the next chapter already ready ;)
OMFG…FABULOUS CHAPTER…So Kelly doesn’t know Bette,RIGHT???
Kelly broke up with Faye and she was pissed and that made her a lesbian hater? THANKS FOR THE WONDERFUL POST ….Please thanks your partner for us………
WOW, I had already figured out that Kelly had something to do with Faye, but being a carbon copy of Bette. Girl you got us there. Alice are they making a movie of this. Too funny. Fantastic update, sooooooooooooo anticipating then next chapter. Great job.
Fantastic! I didn’t see that coming at all. You are a literary goddess. Hurry and post the next chapter.