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    Satin Sheets – Part 5

    Story written on September 24, 2004 by cramit.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=49576
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    Almost there…..

    Bette tried to get her breathing under control, faintly aware of her wife’s soft hands starting to move across her shoulders. Mistaking the caress as a soothing one, Bette closed her eyes, nuzzling Tina’s neck. Content to simply feel the comforting weight of Tina’s warm body for the time being, Bette’s senses were unprepared for the path that Tina traveled next.


    Instead of the soft caress that she knew Bette was expecting, Tina was steadily pushing up, sliding her hands along those defined biceps, placing a whisper of a kiss against Bette’s shoulder in appreciation. Continuing in reverence over Bette’s forearms, pressing her thumbs lightly into the muscle, Tina reached her intended destination, clasping her fingers together over slim wrists and raising Bette’s arms over her head. Feeling Bette stretched out beneath her, Tina felt a sense of erotic power electrify her body. She knew that Bette was hers for the taking and she had every intention of making sure she was worthy of such a precious gift.


    The moment Tina captured her wrists, Bette’s eyes had flown open, becoming immediately absorbed by the intense look spreading across her wife’s face. Bette’s body recognized the look a mere moment before her mind did and she was helpless to control the shiver that shook her slender frame. Despite the heat generated by their lovemaking, goosebumps spread across Bette’s skin, hardening aching nipples and releasing a new flood of wetness between her thighs. Reaching with her mouth towards that luscious bottom lip, Bette kissed Tina with unrestrained passion, tongues pushing back and forth, each fighting for control of the kiss but neither one really caring who won. Over and over their tongues moved against each other, bodies held perfectly still as that kiss became their entire focus.


    Bette could feel the sweat dampened strands of Tina’s hair as they brushed along her cheeks, carrying the faint smell of shampoo and the delicious scent that was uniquely Tina’s. The sweet taste of her mouth and lips making Bette moan with each touch of Tina’s tongue on hers. She closed her eyes and lost herself in the heat of Tina’s mouth. It was all getting to be too much for Bette. She wanted that tongue to do things, to touch her, to ***** her, to love her. Digging her fingers into her palms, Bette tried to bring her hands down to touch Tina, to caress her cheeks and guide that ***** mouth to those secret places on Bette’s body that Tina knew by heart.


    Tina had been so caught up in their kiss, that she didn’t realize right away that Bette was starting to move her hands out of Tina’s grasp. Roughly pulling away from Bette’s mouth with a groan, Tina redoubled her hold on Bette’s wrists, sliding her hips until she was straddling Bette’s right leg. Sliding her wetness along Bette’s thigh, Tina transferred both of Bette’s wrists to one hand and languidly started to trail her right hand back down Bette’s arm. Leaning in, Tina tugged on Bette’s bottom lip, drawing Bette’s eyes back to her. Soothing that lip with her tongue, Tina spoke in a husky tone that traveled straight to Bette’s center.


    “Don’t move, Bette. I mean it. I know you want to so bad. Mmmmm..do you want to ***** me again, baby? I’m still so wet for you”, Tina whispered.


    Closing her eyes briefly, she rocked forward, letting a little more of her wetness rub against Bette. Still sliding her hand down Bette’s body, Tina cupped Bette’s breast, letting her thumb flick against her wife’s hard nipple, delighting in hearing the breath catch in her throat. Needing to hear that sound again, Tina bent her head to Bette’s nipple, licking round and round, drawing it deeper into her mouth, feeling it grow impossibly harder against her tongue. She felt Bette’s back arch suddenly, her hips jerking forward, releasing a low, ***** groan and she had to struggle to maintain Bette’s wrists within her grasp. Entwining her fingers with Bette’s, pressing her hands a little firmer into the bed, Tina raised her head and locked eyes with her lover.


    “I want you. So much that it takes my breath away sometimes, ” Tina confessed to Bette, sweeping those dark curls back off her forehead, tracing the outline of her eyebrows, the curve of her cheek and her mouth, with her thumb. “You are so beautiful. You touch me and nothing else matters. Only you. The feel of you and the smell of you, the way you look at megod, the taste of you against my tongue”


    Unable to hold back any longer, Tina allowed her fingertips to glide along Bette’s ribs, down across her hip, running the back of her hand gently over the soft hair covering Bette’s *****. She turned her hand back over, sliding through damp curls, drawing her fingers down against Bette’s wetness, dipping her fingers in, gasping at the heat that greeted her. Barely moving her fingers, Tina once again spoke to Bette, her voice trembling with desire.


    “Just the taste of you, Bette, can make me comeI can never get enough of youhow sweet and warm you arebabyCome with me…”


    And with that, Tina raised her hand up, her fingers glistening with Bette’s wetness in the soft glow of the morning. Tracing Bette’s mouth with her wet fingertips, Tina leaned in, placing fevered, bruising kisses along her wife’s lips. Thrusting her tongue into Bette’s mouth, letting Bette taste herself, swallowing Bette’s groans with her own. Once again reaching her hand down, coating her fingers in Bette’s essence, Tina placed her fingertips between their mouths. Their tongues swirling together, sharing Bette’s warm wetness, lips sliding together, grunting a bit now as their bodies shifted against each other, Tina finally released Bette’s wrists.


    Immediately, Bette gripped Tina’s head, plunging her tongue into her mouth, loving the taste of herself on Tina’s lips. Her fingers caressing the base of Tina’s skull, thumbs running along her jaw line, feeling as her mouth moved. Listening to the moans Tina was making, her body trembling as the wetness of the kiss rang out in the quiet of the room, Bette almost arched up off the bed as Tina took her by surprise.


    “Oh my god, Tinayes…please…*****, yesfuck me”


    Sliding easily through Bette’s wetness, Tina ran her two fingers alongside Bette’s *****, feeling her own insides tighten at the sensation, before plunging deep inside. Tracing Bette’s mouth with her other hand, Tina’s ***** pulsed as she felt Bette take those fingers into her mouth, running her tongue and teeth along her fingertips. Tina looked up and the intensity with which Bette was watching her, with her furrowed brow and the pulse pounding wildly along her throat, she knew it was time.


    “Come for me, Bette.”

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    7. hmm, let me see here…cramit says, and i DO quote, “Each part has been a bit of an eye-opener for myself because I’m not a hundred percent sure where it’s all coming from.” ROTFLMAO…get the f*ck outta here!

      more finesse than any writer on any fanfic site. this is incredible. i can’t be readin’ stuff like this…brings back LOTS of memories! love it. now, if you would…GET TO WRITING, CHICA! CHOP-CHOP, MAMA!

    9. *lol* @sparta. I won’t deny that the images are pulled from experiences, but to actually write scenes like this out, without my cheeks bursting into flames is what’s getting me. I finish writing and I go back to proof-read and I’m like, where did that just come from though? :)

      All you guys are so awesome. Your comments mean alot and I’m really happy that this fic is working. I’ve been inspired by so many writers on here in their portrayal of Bette and Tina, (SNS/Olives, Seahurst, mariebrandt, tavy and so, so many others that I can’t pull off the top of my head) that I’m glad I could contribute to that tradition in some small way. :)

      Now that I’ve buttered you all up with praise ;), I have to inform you that I must leave Bette in this uncomfortable limbo, probably until Monday. I have a pretty busy weekend and I won’t be able to post the next chapter until Mon. Hope you guys will bear with me and that this extended wait will be worth it.

    10. Cramit, forget reading us for inspriration, now we’re reading you! And this whole series is gorgeous! You have a way with the details that makes everything so rich and vivid. Beautifully written. I can’t say enough good things about your writing. Writing erotica is hard and you’ve done it brilliantly.

    14. Oh my goodness!! I really do feel like I’m intruding on them as I read this story. I don’t normally get warmed up when I read these fanfics because I’m straight but I swear you’re doing something to me. That just shows the power of your writing. Thank you for sharing your talent.

    33. MMM you really know how to turn a girl on don’t you. I totally love yuor story It’s HOT HOT HOT. I agree with alot of the girls when they say you have them waiting a girlfriend and their straight.

    37. Yeah, first one. :) I didn’t even really intend to write one like this, but I had the image in that first paragraph of the first part stuck in my head for days for some reason. I was at home and wrote it out, kind of liked the way it felt and then kept going with it. Each part has been a bit of an eye-opener for myself because I’m not a hundred percent sure where it’s all coming from. :) I’ve been reading the fan fic here for a while and I think I’ve just tried to write the way some of my favorite authors have. It really stems from having enough heartache over B & T being apart and moving onto other people. I wanted to write something where none of that betrayal was part of it. :)

    39. You may not have written fanfic before, but from the looks of what you’ve produced, I’d say you definitely have experience in writing stories. I agree with both Marie and Techgal that this one is beautifully written and polished. Of course, there’s no denying how unbelievably hot it is too. Thanks for your contribution!

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